True Submission

Surrendering gives life,
To surrender is to have power
Power over every dominion
Power to change
Power to lead
Power to go untouched when every hand is against.
With every inhale and exhale
There’s a submission
To the next breath that allows
The lungs to fill up with air and release gases
That’s power within.
Whether it’s used for good or bad
So, what source do you submit?
What gets total surrender?
Whatever you choose to surrender to 
That’s what you’re responsible for.
That’s what you’re entrusted with
Don’t allow you’re fear,
Lack of belief,
Or understanding
Deter you away from your assignment.
Submit to His will!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 7:02 AM
If we surrender to God's will for our lives, life goes better for us. I enjoyed reading your faith-based work. Sara
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:47 AM
You're so right! The first step is to surrender. Thanks for supporting my work. Shy
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