Sathya Babu Poet Tetractys

True Smile

Our
                                        breakfast
                                       is when all 
                                meet in warm greet,
                   the joy we share in these moments we spare
              makes the day bright and turns tasks it brings light;
                                when share and care
                                      pairs, Life bares
                                          its true
                                           Smile.
  


6-Nov-2020
Double Tetractys 5 Poetry Contest, Photo 3
Double Tetractys consisting of 10 lines and a total of 40 syllables
(Syllable per line 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1)
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Linda Alice Fowler November 15, 2020 at 6:34 AM Very nice Sathya. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Eve Roper November 14, 2020 at 6:59 PM Love your poem, Sathya, great imagery and flow. Congratulation on your awesome win. Happy Thanksgiving. Hugs Eve

Susan Ashley November 14, 2020 at 5:16 PM Indeed! Sathya, your poem is heartwarming and very lovely with rhymes that add a sparkle. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Newton Ranaweera November 14, 2020 at 4:16 AM Congratulations, Sathya, on your win in the contest!!

Jo Chamberlain November 14, 2020 at 2:23 AM Congratulations on your winning poem.

Sam Kauffman November 6, 2020 at 12:22 PM These truly are precious moments, Sathya. Best wishes for the contest.