True Love

You,you don't know what I feel for you You are an angel that came to my life That's when I realized my dreams came true Brightened my life, made it worth living The only reason of my existence Brighter than the brightest star ,prettiest you are I really have no words to describe your beauty You are like a drug and I want to stay addicted to you Even if my life comes to an end But I will always preach you like God because you are my everything At last I feel for you what nobody had ever felt

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/23/2024 6:13:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 11:38:00 AM

Gurleen Kaur, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 10:24:00 AM

GURLEEN, a pleasure to read :) have yourself A wonderful Christmas and Happy New Year....... SKAT LOVE

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/22/2015 9:48:00 AM

that is something to walk and flee with no lust,,but when we look out and in and around its oll lust and thrust but i can figure about the divinity you hold in it nice write plz find some time to read a few of mine,, hope you will like them