True Love

Love
                                               is when your laying 
                                              under a blanket,with 
                                              her and she rolls over,
                                                            unintentionally taking all------------------------>
                                             of the covers. Then you 
                                                 wake up shivering,
                                              looking at how snuggled  
                                            and warm she is. Then you 
                                               smile, shake your head
                                               and fall asleep, warm
                                                again. As if you were 
                                              under that blanket again,
                                                       that's love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Britt Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:48 PM
Like I said, your poetry has SO much personality. I always will enjoy reading your work, Elliott <3
Makama Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 5:54 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
Sellman Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Awww Thats Sweet :)
Irisha Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 6:55 AM
Awww sweet!
Croft Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 10:38 AM
very nice!!!
Allen Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Elliott you put this so warmly and brilliantly. How could you not win the heart of every woman in here with this one. Well done. Huggs TLee
Cheesman Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 1:47 AM
aaaaaw this is so sweet...lovely and definitely example of love sweet love mwah
Renee Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 12:03 AM
Very nice and so true!
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