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True Love

When falls between us stillness of the night Our hearts in peace sway with sweet conviction Beneath the stars dear lips that reunite Succumb to divine blest addiction Full lustrous moon hangs high up in the sky The two of us kick back as days wind down Hovers a harmony we can’t deny Reminiscent of fab times all around Through thick or thin carried out our mission A loving life we crafted as we please The dreams we cast have come to fruition Upon a balmy perfumed summer breeze With angels overlooking from above Years paved a steadfast path to find true love Submitted on February 7, 2020 for contest A SONNET TRUE LOVE sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI - RANKED 4TH

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John Watt

Date: 2/21/2020 11:40:00 PM

Line, your sonnet of true love is a tribute to committed and long lasting love. I enjoyed the line, "Hovers a harmony we can’t deny. Well done, and congrats on your win ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2020 11:46:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/20/2020 9:41:00 PM

Line, enjoyed reading your verse. May love seed always flourish as painful as it can be at times. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2020 9:58:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2020 6:26:00 PM

what a beautiful romantic sonnet Line, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2020 9:58:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/20/2020 10:15:00 AM

Sooooo romantic Line! I love your entry. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2020 12:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 2/20/2020 3:37:00 AM

Lind this was beautiful! Congrats on your win!:)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2020 12:09:00 PM

Thanks for hosting this contest, Brenda. I loved the inspiration.

Jessica Renee Dawson

Date: 2/16/2020 1:34:00 PM

A beautifully written sonnet with excellent metre.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/16/2020 3:34:00 PM

Thank you, JR. Most appreciated.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/10/2020 9:42:00 PM

Very lovely, descriptive sonnet, Line. Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2020 11:18:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Janice.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/8/2020 11:56:00 PM

The dreams we cast have come to fruition..Upon a balmy perfumed summer breeze.. Some lines are beautiful.. Great entry in the contest Line.. Good luck..

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/8/2020 11:57:00 PM

Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.

Michelo Mweetwa

Date: 2/7/2020 4:41:00 PM

I love how it beautifully describes a certain level of satisfaction that love gives. I love it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/7/2020 10:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Michelo. Most appreciated.