Line Gauthier Poet Sonnet

True Love

When falls between us stillness of the night
Our hearts in peace sway with sweet conviction
Beneath the stars dear lips that reunite 
Succumbing to divine blest addiction

Full lustrous moon hangs high up in the sky
The two of us kick back as days wind down
Hovers a harmony we can’t deny
Reminiscent of fab times all around

Through thick or thin carried out our mission
A loving life we crafted as we please
The dreams we cast have come to fruition
Upon a balmy perfumed summer breeze

With angels overlooking from above
Years paved a steadfast path toward true love



AP: 3rd place 2025, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on February 7, 2020 for contest A SONNET TRUE LOVE sponsored by BRENDA CHIRI  -  RANKED 4TH

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John Watt February 21, 2020 at 11:40 PM Line, your sonnet of true love is a tribute to committed and long lasting love. I enjoyed the line, "Hovers a harmony we can’t deny. Well done, and congrats on your win ~ John Line Gauthier February 21, 2020 at 11:46 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.

Eve Roper February 20, 2020 at 9:41 PM Line, enjoyed reading your verse. May love seed always flourish as painful as it can be at times. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Line Gauthier February 20, 2020 at 9:58 PM Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison February 20, 2020 at 6:26 PM what a beautiful romantic sonnet Line, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Line Gauthier February 20, 2020 at 9:58 PM Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Connie Marcum Wong February 20, 2020 at 10:15 AM Sooooo romantic Line! I love your entry. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo Line Gauthier February 20, 2020 at 12:09 PM Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.

Brenda Chiri February 20, 2020 at 3:37 AM Lind this was beautiful! Congrats on your win!:) Line Gauthier February 20, 2020 at 12:09 PM Thanks for hosting this contest, Brenda. I loved the inspiration.

Jessica Renee Dawson February 16, 2020 at 1:34 PM A beautifully written sonnet with excellent metre. Line Gauthier February 16, 2020 at 3:34 PM Thank you, JR. Most appreciated.

Janice Canerdy February 10, 2020 at 9:42 PM Very lovely, descriptive sonnet, Line. Janice Line Gauthier February 10, 2020 at 11:18 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Janice.

Jenish Somadas February 8, 2020 at 11:56 PM The dreams we cast have come to fruition..Upon a balmy perfumed summer breeze.. Some lines are beautiful.. Great entry in the contest Line.. Good luck.. Line Gauthier February 8, 2020 at 11:57 PM Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.

Michelo Mweetwa February 7, 2020 at 4:41 PM I love how it beautifully describes a certain level of satisfaction that love gives. I love it. Line Gauthier February 7, 2020 at 10:59 PM Thank you so much, Michelo. Most appreciated.