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I used to dream when I was new Of midnight curls, eyes sapphire blue: Long years ago, it now does seem When I was new, I used to dream. I must confess, as dreams are free I didn't see you wait for me. My eyes were shut, my heart no less As dreams are free, I must confess. Then years flew by; I woke at last My childhood dreams became my past. With just three words, a dance, a sigh I woke at last – then years flew by. The love I found, it went away; I lost your hand one sunny day. It slipped from mine, fell to the ground: It went away, the love I found. My strength, my world, I watched it fade, Those years of light fell into shade. My body done, my soul unfurled, I watched it fade, my strength, my world. The past is haze but I’m not done; I linger on: alone, I’m one. I fear my grief will drown my days, But I’m not done – the past is haze. The love we share, it’s all I need, For though I’m lost, I know you’ll lead. I’ll follow you and break despair – It’s all I need, the love we share. (a swap quatrain poem for Andrea Dietrich’s 'Swap Quatrains' Contest)

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Date: 1/31/2016 6:45:00 PM
enjoying this read again. skat
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Date: 3/16/2014 5:58:00 PM
hey, I finally saw your note to me. So glad you enjoyed this form and I hope to see you writing more poems.
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/17/2014 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! :)
Date: 3/9/2014 12:30:00 PM
Keep writing! I enjoyed this and congrats on your win. BG
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/10/2014 1:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Barbara! Really enjoying the experience and now looking forward to a quiet afternoon so that I can read lots more Soup poems!! :)
Date: 3/9/2014 11:27:00 AM
Lindsey, I really enjoyed your swap quatrains in my contest. I was hoping for more of a transition into that last stanza, for why you said "I know you'll lead" when it looks as if the speaker in the poem has already lost her love. Was wanting to see a reason for her having hope in that case. Other than that, I loved everything about this. Congrats on your win.
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/10/2014 1:03:00 PM
Many thanks for the lovely feedback Andrea - and for running this excellent competition! I really enjoyed trying out something new and I couldn't agree more about that last stanza - I even added a few more lines in a later edit to try and smooth out the transition! :)
Date: 3/9/2014 9:54:00 AM
This is so good, congrats. One of my personal favorites.
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/10/2014 12:55:00 PM
Many thanks, Richard! I loved your poem too! X :)
Date: 3/9/2014 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, lindsey
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/10/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram! :)
Date: 3/9/2014 1:26:00 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Lindsey
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/10/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thanks very much!
Date: 3/7/2014 5:06:00 AM
Your words kept me reaching for more, this is a wonderful write..Welcome to the Soup and please keep writing these beautiful poems...Blessings, Chris
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/7/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Chris - your encouraging feedback has made my day :)
Date: 3/7/2014 3:13:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lindsey :) - I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/7/2014 8:54:00 AM
Many thanks for your warm message, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 3/7/2014 12:20:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Lindsey, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/7/2014 2:08:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely welcome, Skat! I really appreciate it :) I've always loved writing but poetry is a new experience for me, so I will be learning as I go along! It's great to know Poetry Soup members are so supportive :)
Date: 3/6/2014 11:09:00 PM
A truly loving, yet saddening experience. Or, could one look at this as an awakening, after all? This was truly expressed with touching bit of emotion.
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/7/2014 1:59:00 AM
Awakening - perfect! That would make a really good title for this poem, Drake! Many thanks for leaving feedback
Date: 3/6/2014 7:16:00 PM
This is very good Lindsey..I wish you well in the contest ..... Tim
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/6/2014 7:22:00 PM
Thanks for the kind feedback Tim! Best wishes
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/6/2014 7:20:00 PM
WOW! Thank you so much Linda for the lovely warm welcome! This is all very new to me so your words of encouragement are very much appreciated :) Looking forward to reading and writing some more poems and getting to know the poetry soup community!! Best wishes, Lindsey :)
Date: 3/6/2014 7:05:00 PM
A lovely poem, Lindsey, love the free feeling and motivation, of expressing your dreamy write. You are a gifted new poet. Andrea, will love this poem. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and offer positive feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to getting to know you and your poetry :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Lindsey Scott
Date: 3/7/2014 1:30:00 AM
WOW! Thank you so much Linda for the lovely warm welcome! This is all very new to me so your words of encouragement are very much appreciated :) Looking forward to reading and writing some more poems and getting to know the poetry soup community!! Best wishes, Lindsey :)

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