True Knight

I used to dream when I was new
Of midnight curls, eyes sapphire blue:
Long years ago, it now does seem
When I was new, I used to dream.

I must confess, as dreams are free
I didn't see you wait for me.
My eyes were shut, my heart no less
As dreams are free, I must confess.

Then years flew by; I woke at last
My childhood dreams became my past.
With just three words, a dance, a sigh
I woke at last – then years flew by.

The love I found, it went away;
I lost your hand one sunny day.
It slipped from mine, fell to the ground:
It went away, the love I found.

My strength, my world, I watched it fade,
Those years of light fell into shade.
My body done, my soul unfurled, 
I watched it fade, my strength, my world.

The past is haze but I’m not done;
I linger on: alone, I’m one.
I fear my grief will drown my days,
But I’m not done – the past is haze.

The love we share, it’s all I need,
For though I’m lost, I know you’ll lead.
I’ll follow you and break despair – 
It’s all I need, the love we share.


(a swap quatrain poem for Andrea Dietrich’s 'Swap Quatrains' Contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 11:02 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 6:45 PM
enjoying this read again. skat
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 5:58 PM
hey, I finally saw your note to me. So glad you enjoyed this form and I hope to see you writing more poems.
Scott Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Andrea! :)
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 12:30 PM
Keep writing! I enjoyed this and congrats on your win. BG
Scott Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 1:06 PM
Thank you very much, Barbara! Really enjoying the experience and now looking forward to a quiet afternoon so that I can read lots more Soup poems!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Lindsey, I really enjoyed your swap quatrains in my contest. I was hoping for more of a transition into that last stanza, for why you said "I know you'll lead" when it looks as if the speaker in the poem has already lost her love. Was wanting to see a reason for her having hope in that case. Other than that, I loved everything about this. Congrats on your win.
Scott Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 1:03 PM
Many thanks for the lovely feedback Andrea - and for running this excellent competition! I really enjoyed trying out something new and I couldn't agree more about that last stanza - I even added a few more lines in a later edit to try and smooth out the transition! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 9:54 AM
This is so good, congrats. One of my personal favorites.
Scott Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Many thanks, Richard! I loved your poem too! X :)
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, lindsey
Scott Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Thank you Dr Ram! :)
Kayode Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 1:26 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Lindsey
Scott Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 12:52 PM
Thanks very much!
Hardy Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 5:06 AM
Your words kept me reaching for more, this is a wonderful write..Welcome to the Soup and please keep writing these beautiful poems...Blessings, Chris
Scott Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, Chris - your encouraging feedback has made my day :)
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 3:13 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lindsey :) - I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Scott Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 8:54 AM
Many thanks for your warm message, Anne-Lise! :)
A  Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 12:20 AM
A beautiful poem, Lindsey, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Scott Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Thanks for the lovely welcome, Skat! I really appreciate it :) I've always loved writing but poetry is a new experience for me, so I will be learning as I go along! It's great to know Poetry Soup members are so supportive :)
Tacito Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 11:09 PM
A truly loving, yet saddening experience. Or, could one look at this as an awakening, after all? This was truly expressed with touching bit of emotion.
Scott Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:59 AM
Awakening - perfect! That would make a really good title for this poem, Drake! Many thanks for leaving feedback
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:16 PM
This is very good Lindsey..I wish you well in the contest ..... Tim
Scott Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Thanks for the kind feedback Tim! Best wishes
Scott Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:20 PM
WOW! Thank you so much Linda for the lovely warm welcome! This is all very new to me so your words of encouragement are very much appreciated :) Looking forward to reading and writing some more poems and getting to know the poetry soup community!! Best wishes, Lindsey :)
A   Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 7:05 PM
A lovely poem, Lindsey, love the free feeling and motivation, of expressing your dreamy write. You are a gifted new poet. Andrea, will love this poem. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and offer positive feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to getting to know you and your poetry :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Scott Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 1:30 AM
WOW! Thank you so much Linda for the lovely warm welcome! This is all very new to me so your words of encouragement are very much appreciated :) Looking forward to reading and writing some more poems and getting to know the poetry soup community!! Best wishes, Lindsey :)
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