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My name is Mattie Ross and I hail from Yell County In the state of Arkansas living, on a ranch with family At the age of fourteen I suffered personal tragedy When my father Frank Ross was taken from me. By a lazy good for nothing drifter that he had hired And if it had been me in charge he would have been fired. That drifter went by the name of Tom Chaney Who was down on his luck, and whom my father took pity. He was quite a devious man with a black mark on his face And to me, he was nothing short of a disgrace He was never around when there was work to be done And I'd often catch him sitting out in the sun. Father wanted to buy ponies, break them in and sell them on And he asked Tom Chaney if he'd like to ride along He went with father to Fort Smith, a busy fur trading town Then got drunk, lost money gambling and shot my father down. He stole money left over that father had to buy ponies And also two lucky gold pieces as he fell to his knees He left him dying in the dirt then managed to get away And for that heinous crime I vowed he would pay. Next day I went to town and asked the Sheriff to help me But said he wouldnt be able to raise a posse Because he didn't have jurisdiction in the Indian nation And added Judge Parkers marshals, might help my situation. I asked who the best was? he said "Rooster Cogburn is his name Wears an eye patch, likes a drink but he's the best in the game He's bringing prisoners in later from the county today He'll sure get the job done, but you'll have to pay". I waited outside the courthouse until he came out A tall man with an eyepatch and he was quite stout I said " Mr Cogburn I have a proposal for you I want you to find my fathers killer, you'll be paid what your due". He agreed but said that he'd rather go it alone That it could turn out quite dangerous and that I should go home On the scene arrived a Texas ranger, by the name of LaBeouf He too was after Chaney saying, he was a wanted killer and thief. I was determined to go with them, they tried to ride off without me But I was determined to be there when they arrested Chaney Out on the trail we found out, he'd joined lucky Ned Peppers gang A bunch of murdering outlaws who should all hang. We made camp and I went to the river, for water to make coffee But I slipped down a slope and there before me stood Chaney I tried to shoot him with father's colt dragoon gun But it jamned and Chaney grabbed me before I could run. He took me back to their camp and Ned's gang rode away But Rooster heavily armed was standing in their way A gunfight ensued Rooster shot most of the gang dead And with his rifle from the hillside LaBeouf shot lucky Ned. LaBeouf came in to Ned's camp and Chaney hit him over the head And as he fell to the ground I prayed that he wasn't dead I picked up father's gun and fired , Chaney was hit The recoil sent me backwards and I fell into a snake pit. LaBeouf came to and pulled me out of the pit And from the mark on my arm noticed that I'd been bit Meanwhile Rooster returned and saw my snake bite He picked me up and rode, all day and all night. He managed to get me to the town doctor, who then saved my life But I lost my left arm to his sharp surgical knife LaBeouf made a good recovery, with just a scar where he'd been hit And I'll never forget him and Rooster, both men with true grit. Written 9th March 2021 Inspired by the novel True Grit by Charles Portis and the movie of the same name made in 1969 that starred John Wayne, Glen Campbell and Kim Darby. There was a remake of True Grit in 2010 starring Jeff Bridges, Matt Damon, Josh Brolin and Hailee Steinfield.

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Date: 12/6/2023 6:07:00 PM
Since 1969, my favorite movie. You did it justice in your piece. Much more detail than my own poem, True Grit. Haven't seen the later version, I fear it would be disappointing.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/6/2023 9:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Reason, True Grit is up there with all the great westerns that were ever made. I did see the remake although it was well made it just didn't do it for me. There will only be ever one John Wayne and it's up there as one of his best. Tom
Date: 5/29/2023 11:39:00 AM
If only there were real people in power like This Tom.' They get sidlined in real life though Slandered and killed 11 apostles followed Jesus why.? They spread the truth is what.' And Who investigates. Today? Maybe a fool like me.' Thats How it is. ' people fall for the lies aim't that the Truth.? Enjoyed the idea here anyway's !
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Date: 5/29/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe, a shame many prefer to look the other way rather than confront evil that's all around us. Politicians are a good example, worried about losing votes rather than stand up and speak out. Tom
Date: 3/11/2021 3:00:00 PM
Hello Tom … John Wayne was so popular way back and he still is today. You’ve done a great job of putting a great western into poetry form - well done Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 3/11/2021 3:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Lindsay, I finally got around to finishing it. Im glad you enjoyed it Tom
Date: 3/11/2021 12:00:00 PM
Hi Tom, I just came back to say I just watched both versions of True Grit. After reading your amazing write, I just had to:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2021 3:18:00 PM
Another classic for sure, his last was a great Western, the shootist.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/11/2021 2:38:00 PM
You got me started now. I just started watching “ The Sons Of Katie Elder”.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/11/2021 1:34:00 PM
Lol! My day is going well.Thanks for asking:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2021 12:43:00 PM
Hi Alexis, I too never get tired of watching them, excellent films but I prefer the original. Hope your day is going well baby sister Tom
Date: 3/10/2021 5:00:00 PM
Wow! What an adventure. What a tale -- so professionally rendered by Poetry Soup's favorite historian-narrator, Tom Cunningham. This is a classic, Tom. Superb job! (And a great experience for me; I never saw the movie). Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 3/11/2021 12:02:00 PM
Gershon, It's a great movie from start to finish. Both versions were good ,but the original version with John Wayne And Glen Campbell is a classic:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, as you've probably guessed I'm a big western fan. Probably one of John Waynes best. Tom
Date: 3/10/2021 11:32:00 AM
I love True Grit - the original with John Wayne. This poem brought it all back. I may rent it if it rains. It is 72 degrees and sunny today, so not today. Great job Tom!
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Date: 3/10/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Caren, without a doubt my favourite western of all time. Tom
Date: 3/10/2021 2:25:00 AM
My goodness, what a great story Tom and what an awesome poem, there will always be good and there will always be bad, very sad, your last poem Karma, tells it all. Blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, had it on the back burner for a while, finally got round to finishing it. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 10:39:00 PM
Wow! I absolutely love this poem! Happy memories of watching True Grit growing up! Rooster sure had true grit!! Well done! Brilliant poem! :-)
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Lisa, one of John Waynes best for which he won an oscar. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 9:39:00 PM
WoW! Tom, You've done an excellent job telling your reader what “ True Grit” was all about. I remember watching this movie starring John Wayne, “ The Duke”. He was such a good actor that had a huge presence on the picture screen. Your well-written write reminds me of why I love cowboy and western movies so much. Superb job, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:49:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, it was one of the best westerns ive ever seen. A story of revenge and extreme courage. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 8:49:00 PM
Wow this is better than the original script, Tom. A brilliant write..Love it....Should post it in your short story list...Harry
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, im happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 6:35:00 PM
A marvelous cowboy tale my friend. I was and still am a huge fan of John Wayne! As he seemed to be so real in every part he played. Ole Rooster sure had a way with words and with his guns too. This is a fav- and a very fine gem it tis,, God bless..
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Date: 3/10/2021 3:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Robert and for the fave. One of my favourite westerns, sadly they don't make them like that anymore. That year certainly holds bittersweet memories for you. Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 3/9/2021 6:37:00 PM
That movie, True Grit came out in 1969 - I was 15 --that was the year my father died from cancer. I can never forget that year my friend. It is when I began my journey in writing poetry.
Date: 3/9/2021 6:05:00 PM
You can certainly churn a story! You picked from one of the best. Our favorite is Big Jake. So many great lines!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2021 5:48:00 AM
The greats! Also Jimmy Stewart, Paul Newman and Cary Grant! The ones who truly act. Tom Hanks seems to stay at the top of his game too!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/10/2021 3:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, I'm happy you enjoyed it. A lot say the shootist was one off his best, three years later he passed away. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 3:00:00 PM
Love those old John Wayne movies. This is a fun write Tom.
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Date: 3/9/2021 3:28:00 PM
Thank you Richard, im pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 12:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem telling the story once again. Seems like maybe at one time I saw this movie but not really sure. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/9/2021 3:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 12:27:00 PM
Tom, you kept me rapt to the end with this fascinating recap of the movie! Bob
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Date: 3/9/2021 12:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Bob, im happy you enjoyed it. I hope alls well. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 10:58:00 AM
Well done! My late youngest sister was a John Wayne fan to the end, and would certainly have framed your poem! Aloha! Rico
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2021 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Rico, im so sorry to hear about your sister. He always played the hero, an outstanding actor. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 10:22:00 AM
I regret I never saw the movie, but you developed the story into a fine poem. It held me to the end.
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Date: 3/9/2021 10:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, it was a brilliant western with John Wayne playing the star role as Rooster Cogburn a one eyed US Marshall and mean as a rattlesnake, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 10:13:00 AM
Rooster Cogburn was one of my favorite John Wayne roles, Tom. I heard that although Kim Darby keeps her arm in the movie, she lost it in the book. Glad the movie wasn't that dark. Thanks for resurrecting memories of this fine film! Hugs, Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/10/2021 2:10:00 PM
Oh, remakes are seldom as good as original films. And I don't think the movie would have the same charm without John Wayne.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you very much Carolyn, an excellent western, I saw the remake which I enjoyed but prefer the original, they don't make them like that anymore. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 9:41:00 AM
That was a fine movie. I saw it too. I think it was the last one John Wayne made. This is a fine write Tom. It holds the reader in . Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/9/2021 10:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Judy, an excellent film I thought it was too but it turns out it was the shootist, he played a gunfighter dying of cancer and it was made in 1976, three years later he died of cancer, everyones favourite cowboy. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 6:30:00 AM
- Wow, Tom ... yes, a great gift ... that will never be forgotten - The story is brought to life with your skill of the art of retelling in your own words - You take the reading back to another time with different "rules of the game" than what we have today :) - An excellen work, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2021 8:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, im pleased you liked it, I hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 5:48:00 AM
Once again you prove what a great storyteller you are, Tom. The movie unfolds in all its grit and glory through your gifted pen. Superbly done, as always.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2021 8:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay, I love stories of the old west, grew up reading Louis L'Amour westerns. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 5:42:00 AM
I loved the westerns when I was a kid, my dad and I watched them a lot. You've written a great story Tom and It was an honor to read your work this morning! Awesome!!
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Date: 3/9/2021 8:28:00 AM
Thank you very much Mark, ive always been fascinated by the old west, im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Tom on this one. Never mind short poems! Shakespeare did not write Haikus nor some of the best poets of our time. You write like I could never do. This is outstanding. Better be a POTD... I could smell your brain on fire across the pond. I was into musicals, dance, movies. I never saw True Grit! Anyway, thank you for the True Gift you are here. Pangie
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2021 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Pangie, glad you liked it, been on the back burner for a while. Tom
Date: 3/9/2021 3:58:00 AM
Who needs to read the book or see the movie after your review, Tom? Spartacus, ya done right good wit this here one.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/9/2021 4:50:00 AM
What ever weapon you wield will be deadly, Rooster.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/9/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you Jenna, I'm happy you liked it, I know many prefer shorter poems and I had to trim it a bit. I don't know why they made another ,I prefer the original though. I've traded my lance and sword for a Colt 45 lol. Just added the opening track, YouTube have changed things a bit,very fiddly to do on an old iPad. Enjoy your day Ma'am. Rooster.

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