William Kelii Kekaula Poet Sedoka

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True Blue Music Lovers

True Blue Music Lovers

Eyes squeezed, ears held shut,

When the Koto is plucked, and

Kimono girl shrieks in league,

After much sake,

The Zither is fined tuned, and

The Soprano is well dressed.

2019 April 29

*3rd Place*

Best Sedoka - 577-577
~~Lu Loo

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Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2019 at 6:26 PM Congrats on your win, William. I like the humorous tone to this! William Kelii Kekaula June 12, 2019 at 6:28 PM That is so kind of you Andrea, Aloha William

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2019 at 1:10 PM - Congratulations on your winning poem, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula June 10, 2019 at 1:20 PM Thanks indeed Anne-Lise, Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues May 1, 2019 at 10:02 AM Very cool Sedoka! Fave! William Kelii Kekaula May 3, 2019 at 5:49 AM It's nice to have some of my thoughts not to go unnoticed