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True Blue Music Lovers Eyes squeezed, ears held shut, When the Koto is plucked, and Kimono girl shrieks in league, After much sake, The Zither is fined tuned, and The Soprano is well dressed. 2019 April 29 *3rd Place* Best Sedoka - 577-577 ~~Lu Loo

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Date: 6/12/2019 6:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win, William. I like the humorous tone to this!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/12/2019 6:28:00 PM
That is so kind of you Andrea, Aloha William
Date: 6/10/2019 1:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 6/10/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks indeed Anne-Lise, Aloha William
Date: 5/1/2019 10:02:00 AM
Very cool Sedoka! Fave!
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Date: 5/3/2019 5:49:00 AM
It's nice to have some of my thoughts not to go unnoticed

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