Trouble Is Stewing

O the stew of human progress The feast of our enterprise Simmered long enough now For society to settle The Fatheads Have risen to the top ***

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2018 10:32:00 PM

Cutting, slicing and dicing: Wicked social commentary, mo. Indubitably so. :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/15/2018 6:56:00 AM

"indubibitably", I love that word! ;) Thank you my friend xomo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/12/2018 2:14:00 AM

Only good for dog food now lol.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/12/2018 7:00:00 AM

Giggles. I suppose still pet food grade lol ;) Greetings Tom! xomo

Mark Toney

Date: 6/11/2018 2:19:00 PM

Maureen, your light verse is full of culinary delights. Please write more so I can have my fill :) I'm putting it in my fave fridge so I can skim off the fat when it cools.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/11/2018 9:57:00 PM

Giggles galore! Thank you :)) xomo!

Tim Smith

Date: 6/11/2018 12:23:00 PM

Lol...might need a little more salt or seasoning

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/14/2018 9:14:00 AM

Well that's someth'n strong ;) wishing you a speedy recovery! xomo

Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 3:23:00 PM

For sure...I can't have too much though...I'm back on hydrocodone again... another surgery yesterday

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/11/2018 9:56:00 PM

I think we're also gonna need something strong to wash it down with. xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/11/2018 10:55:00 AM

No one in his right mind can dispute your declaration my dearest, Maureen. The state of humanity proves you right! Look who is meeting in Singapore tomorrow! haha

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/11/2018 9:54:00 PM

You're awesome sweet Demetrios :) thank you! Love and giggles! xomo