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Troubadour Heart

Troubadour Heart Your troubadour heart diamond embers sows through cloudlike patches of blue gently strumming wreathes of feathered accords and when sadness rears its grieving head your strings weaving invisible threads a simple melody lace and a thousand lifting notes rise tied in a flow of caressing waves calling me back from a dark and grave soul stealing place and I now bathe in the dreams of tomorrow as your troubadour heart carries mine away . . .

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/30/2020 6:33:00 AM

Wonderful write! Come back, Anne-Marie. You are missed on Poetry Soup (PS). PS is not perfect, and people play games everywhere ... even during COVID 19 pandemic. But Jesus loved people, knowing what we are ... Your presence is needed NOW. Even your words say as much: "lifting notes rise tied in a flow of caressing waves calling me back". shalom shalOM. DEO

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/6/2017 11:48:00 PM

Awesome muse in freeverse. Tge troubadour heart, wow it carries me away too with your creative poem. Lovely word choice. Thumbs up. So nice to read from your pen again. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Darren White

Date: 10/8/2017 7:36:00 AM

Just wondering how you're doing. Take care my friend :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 10/9/2017 8:34:00 PM

I've got a little something for your Darren. If you go to 'Flightless? pour Darren' you will find a little video I put together last summer for you:)

Mpho Kgaswane

Date: 9/12/2017 3:47:00 AM

Hi Anne-Marie. A very lovely poem and stimulates one's thoughts. I love the picture. Regards.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 10/9/2017 8:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Mpho. I'm glad you liked it:)

Verlecia Fields

Date: 7/17/2017 3:37:00 AM

The poem made me think of a handsome troubadour - walking and singing in a troubadour suit of brown and blue - with a woman sitting in a window - she's sad because she has fallen in love with him - and he is on his way to the next town

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 7/18/2017 4:06:00 PM

I love your interpretation Verlecia:)

Darren White

Date: 7/11/2017 3:01:00 AM

Anne-Marie, I miss you.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 7/12/2017 8:34:00 PM

Je m'excuse de ma longue absence et tu me manques aussi Darren.

James Inman

Date: 7/3/2017 7:20:00 PM

Annie-Marie, this sounds as if it were written for a singer/song writer that you know or admire. It's beautifully written, really love the last stanza.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 7/5/2017 9:26:00 AM

Thank you, James. Indeed, I had in mind numerous singers, songwriters and poets who inspire me when I wrote this:)

Chris Green

Date: 6/27/2017 5:00:00 PM

I know I have commented on this before but I thought I'd pop in again today because I miss you beautiful poetry. I hope all is well in your world.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/29/2017 11:44:00 AM

Life has become a little bit too hectic lately and I decided to take a break from poetry; but I will be back. I too miss reading your beautiful lines and I look forward to having the time again to rejoin the Soup:)

Agona Apell

Date: 6/10/2017 2:34:00 PM

Powerful use of imagery here, Anne-Marie... Nothing quite draws me to a poem like the pull of fine imagery.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/10/2017 8:15:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comment Agona.

Agona Apell
Date: 6/10/2017 2:35:00 PM

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/7/2017 12:22:00 AM

Excellent. Great imagery write with well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/8/2017 7:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Ravi for your kind comment.

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/4/2017 9:39:00 AM

Love your work. Great images.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/4/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words Carol.

Giacomo Nerone

Date: 6/4/2017 9:07:00 AM

Muito obrigado por compartilhar os seus poemas. Gostei muito daquele do Coração Trovador . Alguns gostei mais. Farei comentários em separado para cada um. Thank you so much for sharing your poems. I really liked that of the Troubadour. Some enjoyed it more. I'll make separate comments for each one.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/4/2017 9:26:00 AM

Thank you for your visit Giacomo. I really enjoy your poetry; with my French/Spanish background and the help of google translate it is fun to read your Portuguese poems:)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 6/1/2017 4:10:00 PM

Oh! What a poem! I see creativity crying profusely, Anne.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/2/2017 7:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment Adeniji :)

Darren White

Date: 6/1/2017 4:20:00 AM

Magnifique, mon amie :) Ohhh I love the musicality (with my dance and violin heart) Love that troubadour heart, don't ever lose it.

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 12:24:00 PM

ahhh, j'ai trouvé cela aujourd'hui.. une petite vidéo au d'un penguin :) We'll see each other soon! Hugs :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/15/2017 8:55:00 AM

Bonjour Darren, mon aînée se cherche désespérément du travail en ce moment et j'essaie de l'aider du mieux que je peux. Tu me manques aussi mon ami mais je ne t'ai pas oublié et j'ai fait une petite vidéo au sujet d'un penguin qui rêve d'aventures . . .

Darren White
Date: 6/13/2017 11:58:00 AM

I miss you my friend :)

Darren White
Date: 6/1/2017 12:19:00 PM

Good! Makes me happy :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/1/2017 12:17:00 PM

Merci mon ami Darren. Ne t'inquiète pas, je ne perdrai jamais mon amour de la musique, c'est ce qui me guide à travers tous les moments tortueux de l'existence et me met du baume au coeur:)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/1/2017 2:52:00 AM

A wonderful poem of yours Anne-Marie, especially love the last three lines, and you carry us readers away into in the dreams of tomorrow. Excellent.......Maria Ps thought you might like to see my experience in this fantastic Japanese Rose Garden....A Rose by any other name....

Maria Williams
Date: 6/2/2017 2:33:00 AM

You are with me on this Anne-Marie. Words of Wisdom my friend.......Maria

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/1/2017 11:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments my friend and wow . . . I am still reeling from my visit to your incredible Rose Garden. You are so right, Maria, we have to bring peace and harmony to this world; we need to heal the wounds and bring friendship and solidarity back among us.

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 6/1/2017 2:40:00 AM

Nice poem Anne-Marie! Love it so much

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/1/2017 10:56:00 AM

Bonjour Kudzai. Thank you for your kind comment.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2017 8:58:00 PM

You carried me away with this poem!

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 6/1/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thank you for your visit Arthur. I am really glad you liked it.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/31/2017 4:19:00 PM

Good Evening Anne-Marie. I hope this night finds you well. Allow me to say "wow" honestly "wow" This is poetic expression in fine and top form. It was an honor turning to your page. Have a wonderful night. Excellent in its entirety.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/31/2017 8:06:00 PM

Bonsoir, Lisa, I am glad you enjoyed it my friend. I will see you on your page:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/31/2017 2:38:00 PM

Anne-Marie, you have so brilliantly conveyed the magical effect music has on our souls. This is outstanding work! 7 ; )

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/31/2017 8:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie for your generous comments and rating. I am glad you liked it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/31/2017 2:38:00 PM

- No expectations ... just let the dreams fly ... beautiful written, Anne-Marie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/31/2017 8:00:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. Yes, music helps our dreams take flight.

Frank Sheehan

Date: 5/31/2017 1:31:00 PM

Truly a wonderful write. The imagery is fantastic. It has a great rhythm and flow to it.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/31/2017 7:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comments. I appreciate your visit.

Chris Green

Date: 5/31/2017 10:34:00 AM

Wow, this was beautiful and so melodically enchanting. The story just swept me away, but music often does that. I love how this is written too, it is such a pleasing read that touches the soul of a musician. Really nice my friend.

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/31/2017 7:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for your comments, Chris. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/31/2017 9:49:00 AM

Very lovely Anne-Marie...so uplifting

Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/31/2017 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Tim, I am glad you liked it.