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Tropical Paradise

Birds doth fly above the sky,
flowers fair and nigh;
as the sun comes shining by,
wet white sand to dry.

Soft the breeze from gentlest seas,
sweetly strums guitar;
lassie sings of love and sees
sailor from afar.







HAVE YOU TRIED A 7/5 TROCHEE - POETRY CONTEST
SPONSOR : ANDREA DIETRICH
19 April 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/21/2015 5:50:00 AM
Well Kim, I enjoyed the balmy ' feel' of this I could smell the sweet dry aroma of straw hats, also the white sand looked like smooth ivory, an entrancing write from my view..'
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Date: 5/7/2015 12:13:00 PM
Very very beautiful. #7. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:52:00 PM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 9:14:00 PM
Hi Kim, congratulations on your nice win for this lovely poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:17:00 PM
Kim, a sweetly romantic paradise that you have sketched for this fine win. Mohan
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Date: 5/2/2015 10:38:00 AM
A lovely and delightful poem, Kim! Just dropping by to say hello and with congratulations on your fine win! Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/2/2015 6:52:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:55:00 AM
Sweet and romantic. Congrats in my contest, Kim.
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:46:00 AM
KIM, NICE ONE:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/1/2015 7:50:00 PM
Very beautiful... I can almost feel the salt-water breeze!
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:00:00 PM
Very charming, with a dash of Scottish!
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:40:00 PM
Perhaps, i forgot to 7. Now done. Loved always,bl
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:39:00 PM
Beauty soars up with sweet rhythm. Nicely done. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 4/23/2015 5:43:00 AM
Kim, perfect timing.. Perfect rhyming.. You put me in a pleasant muse!
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Date: 4/22/2015 4:58:00 PM
A trail of memories and mind frames that link together to form a chain of dreams, each link different yet connected. Emile.
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Date: 4/22/2015 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful. #7
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:32:00 PM
G'day Kim... this poem really does set the scene of a tropical paradise. Thank you Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:50:00 AM
Very lovely Kim, makes me want a vacation at the beach! ~Jan
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:55:00 AM
Hi Kim, It definitely sounds like you're on holidays now. Lovely piece Kim. Hugs from John
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:23:00 PM
Sun, wind and song . . . paradise indeed! 7
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:40:00 PM
- Wish I was there !!! - Beautiful !!!! - I wish you best of luck in the contest, dear Kim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/20/2015 7:28:00 AM
Beautiful Kim.. :)!!! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmn, I wanna be there!!! ~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/20/2015 6:54:00 AM
I like the phraseology. Thanks for sharing..7!
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Date: 4/20/2015 4:55:00 AM
I've never been to the tropics, unless one can count Wildwood NJ, OceanCity NJ and Ocean City Maryland, But, I have seen some great romantic tropical movies that lets me enjoy this write dear poet ! TY And have a wonderful week Kim !.........................much love, james
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Date: 4/19/2015 10:43:00 PM
Love this one.. A7 and good luck in the contest..
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