Kp Nunez Poet Quatrain

Tropical Paradise

Birds doth fly above the sky,
flowers fair and nigh;
as the sun comes shining by,
wet white sand to dry.

Soft the breeze from gentlest seas,
sweetly strums guitar;
lassie sings of love and sees
sailor from afar.







HAVE YOU TRIED A 7/5 TROCHEE - POETRY CONTEST
SPONSOR : ANDREA DIETRICH
19 April 2015

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Joe Maverick May 21, 2015 at 5:50 AM Well Kim, I enjoyed the balmy ' feel' of this I could smell the sweet dry aroma of straw hats, also the white sand looked like smooth ivory, an entrancing write from my view..'

Nandita Das May 7, 2015 at 12:13 PM Very very beautiful. #7. Congratulations on your win.

Skat A May 3, 2015 at 9:52 PM Hi Kim, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT

Sandra Haight May 2, 2015 at 9:14 PM Hi Kim, congratulations on your nice win for this lovely poem! Hugs, Sandra

Mohan Chutani May 2, 2015 at 12:17 PM Kim, a sweetly romantic paradise that you have sketched for this fine win. Mohan

Paul Callus May 2, 2015 at 10:38 AM A lovely and delightful poem, Kim! Just dropping by to say hello and with congratulations on your fine win! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison May 2, 2015 at 6:52 AM Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2015 at 12:55 AM Sweet and romantic. Congrats in my contest, Kim.

Skat A May 2, 2015 at 12:46 AM KIM, NICE ONE:) Congratulations! Forever ~SKAT~

Wally Flint May 1, 2015 at 7:50 PM Very beautiful... I can almost feel the salt-water breeze!

Etienne Lariviere April 27, 2015 at 3:00 PM Very charming, with a dash of Scottish!

Bl Devnath April 25, 2015 at 8:40 PM Perhaps, i forgot to 7. Now done. Loved always,bl

Bl Devnath April 25, 2015 at 8:39 PM Beauty soars up with sweet rhythm. Nicely done. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Emile Pinet April 22, 2015 at 4:58 PM A trail of memories and mind frames that link together to form a chain of dreams, each link different yet connected. Emile.

Deborah Turner April 22, 2015 at 3:51 PM Beautiful. #7

Lindsay Laurie April 21, 2015 at 10:32 PM G'day Kim... this poem really does set the scene of a tropical paradise. Thank you Kim - Lindsay

Jaycee Cervenka April 21, 2015 at 10:50 AM Very lovely Kim, makes me want a vacation at the beach! ~Jan

John Williams April 21, 2015 at 2:55 AM Hi Kim, It definitely sounds like you're on holidays now. Lovely piece Kim. Hugs from John

David Meade April 20, 2015 at 8:23 PM Sun, wind and song . . . paradise indeed! 7

Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2015 at 1:40 PM - Wish I was there !!! - Beautiful !!!! - I wish you best of luck in the contest, dear Kim ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 20, 2015 at 7:28 AM Beautiful Kim.. :)!!! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmn, I wanna be there!!! ~olive eloisa

Hannington Mumo April 20, 2015 at 6:54 AM I like the phraseology. Thanks for sharing..7!

James Peranteau April 20, 2015 at 4:55 AM I've never been to the tropics, unless one can count Wildwood NJ, OceanCity NJ and Ocean City Maryland, But, I have seen some great romantic tropical movies that lets me enjoy this write dear poet ! TY And have a wonderful week Kim !.........................much love, james

Robert Lindley April 19, 2015 at 10:43 PM Love this one.. A7 and good luck in the contest..

Debbie Guzzi April 19, 2015 at 7:27 PM delightful! Light & Love

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