Tropical Paradise

Alligators bask lazily on tree limbs overhanging the meandering rivers Gentle manatees playfully rise above the water line to catch a breath Such a delight to see these threatened mammals rebounding Palms and Live Oaks stand as sentries on the river banks Casting tropical silhouettes against the orange orb as it succumbs below pink clouds Across the peninsula on the Atlantic coast, seagulls huddle together Winter winds ruffle their feathers as they scavenge for food Even in cold weather, “snowbirds” flock to our shores Retirees leave their footprints on our white sands Each day, their prints are washed away as the tide thrusts its wet arms *Entry for Brian's Imagery contest
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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 10:37 PM
I think I saw this one before and it was great. On the diet thing, I think I've lost all I can expect to now. Even though I only lost a little weight, my family thought I was looking good. I guess they are used to the new "me" who is a lot more bustier now!! it's all good!! If I try to lose more, I would not be able to enjoy life!!!
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 3:27 PM
Wow Carolyn..I loved this..for me it was much higher! Congrad's Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 9:08 PM
This is lovely Carolyn. I have been missing you. Hope you are doing well. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 4:58 PM
This is very lovely, painting a beach scene like this one. I love shores with birds and other beautiful things to see. Congratulations and a happy new year, Carolyn.
Pettit Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on having your entry chosen among the winners in this contest. Have a Happy New Year, Carolyn.
Knop Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:12 AM
Hi Carolyn, how are you? Hope you're feeling better and had a joyous Christmas! I wish you a better health for 2012! Thank you for commenting "Dragonflies' Dance"! I only read your comment today. I see you really love your "Tropical Paradise"! Wish you best of luck in the contest! My problems with both arms/hands still remain and I'll have many appointments next week. Hopefully 2012 will be a better year for both of us!...Love, Gert
Devnath  Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Congratulation on your win, my friend. bl
Loving Iii Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 7:24 AM
must be great to have a east and west coast. i think God was wonderful to do it that way. and for you to know how to be renewed by nature... Faust was renewed by natures beauty. and to thing we have a whole world of picturesque places. and your blessed enough to live in one of them. merry christmas carolyn. i'm back.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 3:21 AM
Congratulations x
Brown Avatar
December 23, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on your worldly win Carolyn. Love, Carol Happy Holidays
Edwards Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 5:08 PM
Im packing my backs and moving in Carolyn..it sounds lovely..congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest xxx
Wesley Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Hi Carolyn, I was a snowbird that used to trek to Sanibel, a paradise indeed. I gather this is where you live, lucky girl; come and taste what we have now. No sun for days so I come to Soup for comfort and companionship. Have a lovely Christmas dear friend. Love, Elizabeth
Brown Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 8:45 AM
Just dropped by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing this past year Carolyn. I have enjoyed reading your poetry and hope to be reading it for years to come. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 4:18 AM
A lovely poem with very nice descriptions of the creatures of your area.Vicinity of sea obviously has a role on your poetic mind Carolyn.Best wishes for the contest.
Horne Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 2:03 PM
It sounds like paradise, my friend
Horsman Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 8:07 AM
You paint a wonderful picture of words, Carolyn, would be lovely to visit there, i'm also born under the water sign. feb. harry
Song Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 5:19 AM
It is wonderful to hear that some threatened animals are repopulating , Carolyn..I know thru your poetry how much this means to you. There are some postcard images in Tropical Paradise....Tons of them!! I am jealous that you get to visit the beach daily for a cleansing of your mind. Who wouldn't write great poetry with scenery like that? ha ha. I will be thinking of you this week especially..A Merry Christmas to you. A Christmas Hug and Kiss too!! Love, Gwendolen
Devnath  Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 11:41 AM
You have snapped the Nature's beauty in such a way that is clearly visible. Nicely captured. Thanks, bl
Maverick Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 1:07 AM
A quite vivid recital of the place you live in Carolyn,, it was winter when i wisited there and went out on the swamp, did not see a live aligator 'just missed one as we all heard a great splash.! and saw the wake of water entry as we came round a bank,,
Goff Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 5:37 PM
I wish I was there with you at sunrise....jimbo
Sivey Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 4:26 PM
What an amazing write Carolyn! I got all wrapped up into your beautiful verse you have written! And I enjoy being wrapped into your poetry!! Great imagery within you poem that lead to awesome pictures in my mind of these animals all from Florida! Excellent Work!!
Haick Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Yes, I must agree, Florida is beautiful, Carolyn....from Jacksonville to Key West! Best wishes for Tracie's Contest and hope all is well. Love, Annalise
Austin Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Oh, my God! If you were to come to Saginaw you would crumple up in a heap - just anything to spare your eyes. What a world of colorful variation you have. I get my goodies from listening to and playing great music. Did you see the Nutcracker, with the New York City ballet and orchestra. It was on Live from Lincoln Center. Best choreography,scenery and all round performance I've seen, and I've seen quite a few. Love, daver
Freeman Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 12:23 PM
I love the scenery Carolyn. You're very apt in writing about things of this type. Your poetry will likely be remembered for this knack. Best of wishes for a winning hand. Agape, Moses
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