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Tropical weather abundant autumn leaves fall.... inhale petrichor memories of November young, in love, cutting firewood
Written: 11/07/2022 For Brian

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Date: 11/10/2022 7:00:00 AM
I like this one a lot Sara. Congratulations your win! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2022 8:32:00 AM
Why, thank you, Linda Alice. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 11/9/2022 1:19:00 AM
Smell, sound and imagery are very capable at leading us back in time, Sara. Personally, the older I get, the more I find myself being transported by such nostalgic feelings. ~ Congratulations on your win. Warm regards // paul
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2022 3:34:00 AM
Why, thank you, Paul. Sometimes it is good to remember as long as a person doesn't get caught up in the past and not move forward. Your visit added a new dimension to my work. Sara
Date: 11/8/2022 6:31:00 PM
'Young in love'.....! Very nostalgic memories, of a time when thoughts of love filled the mind. A beautiful tanka, dear Sara. Congratulations on your win!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2022 3:30:00 AM
Valsa, thank you for dropping by with congratulations. Yes, marriage in youth and before children with added responsibilities was a totally different time of life for us. Sara
Date: 11/8/2022 5:43:00 PM
Nostalgic and the unique, enlivening smell of earth. Beautiful write, Sara, congrats on your win in Brian’s contest
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2022 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, US. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara
Date: 11/8/2022 9:02:00 AM
Ah! 'Young, in love, cutting firewood.' Do those folks realize how precious that time is? Nostalgic, resonant image, Sara. N6M
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 1:45:00 PM
Gershon, I did not know how precious that time was at the time, but I enjoyed each moment that we shared together back then. The firewood was not even for our home but his parents. Thanks for your kind review. Sara
Date: 11/8/2022 6:35:00 AM
Wonderful Tanka, Sara. I liked your 3rd line too much: "inhale petrichor" feel the earth exhale. Best luck with the contest.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. Yes, the scent comes from plants and the earth and it seemed to be more frequent years ago. Thanks for best wishes. Sara
Date: 11/8/2022 1:13:00 AM
Such imagery. Best for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 2:33:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Sara
Date: 11/7/2022 6:28:00 PM
Could not have been summed up more succinctly.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 2:28:00 AM
Why, thank you, Pashang. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 11/7/2022 4:40:00 PM
Dear Sara, beautiful Tanka, to me - a winner. Inhaling petrichor - brings back memories. Best wishes for the contest.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 2:25:00 AM
Malabika, I appreciate the visit to my page with a nice review and best wishes. Sara
Date: 11/7/2022 2:44:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 2:20:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I am glad you did. I hope it draws out a creative thought or two from your creative side. Sara
Date: 11/7/2022 2:38:00 PM
Ah, you made my heart jump and smile
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 2:13:00 AM
Thank you, MRR. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

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