Tropical

Tropical weather
abundant autumn leaves fall....
inhale petrichor
memories of November
young, in love, cutting firewood    

Written: 11/07/2022
For Brian

lifetanka

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Linda Alice Fowler

November 10, 2022 at 7:00 AM

I like this one a lot Sara. Congratulations your win! :)

Sara Kendrick

November 10, 2022 at 8:32 AM

Why, thank you, Linda Alice. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Paul Callus

November 9, 2022 at 1:19 AM

Smell, sound and imagery are very capable at leading us back in time, Sara. Personally, the older I get, the more I find myself being transported by such nostalgic feelings. ~ Congratulations on your win. Warm regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2022 at 3:34 AM

Why, thank you, Paul. Sometimes it is good to remember as long as a person doesn't get caught up in the past and not move forward. Your visit added a new dimension to my work. Sara

Valsa George

November 8, 2022 at 6:31 PM

'Young in love'.....! Very nostalgic memories, of a time when thoughts of love filled the mind. A beautiful tanka, dear Sara. Congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2022 at 3:30 AM

Valsa, thank you for dropping by with congratulations. Yes, marriage in youth and before children with added responsibilities was a totally different time of life for us. Sara

Unseeking Seeker

November 8, 2022 at 5:43 PM

Nostalgic and the unique, enlivening smell of earth. Beautiful write, Sara, congrats on your win in Brian’s contest

Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2022 at 3:24 AM

Thank you, US. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara

Gershon Wolf

November 8, 2022 at 9:02 AM

Ah! 'Young, in love, cutting firewood.' Do those folks realize how precious that time is? Nostalgic, resonant image, Sara. N6M

Sara Kendrick

November 8, 2022 at 1:45 PM

Gershon, I did not know how precious that time was at the time, but I enjoyed each moment that we shared together back then. The firewood was not even for our home but his parents. Thanks for your kind review. Sara