Trixie Throws Me Ideas

Poetry prances into my dendrite field, taking charge,
Taking over, taking me hostage
Perhaps I want to paint today, I tell her.

She scoffs. Smacks me lightly on my brain stem.
Makes fun of me.
Calls me names.

I am not in the mood, I tell her, prissily.
Convincing no one.
Least of all me.

You do not have to write metaphors,
She tells me.
We are not good at them

Well, thank you for that, I think.
She sticks out her tongue.
I laugh

She gives me a line
I decide to dig in my heels, ignoring her
The second line entices me a bit

They rhyme
And you know how we love to rhyme
Dram it!

I hastily finish the faerie I was drawing
Cast her aside and 
Pick up my notebook which had been on ready-alert,
Just in case

My muse Trixie
The one I give full credit to
Daily

Sometimes hourly
The one who throws me about
And gives me battle axes of my own

Laughs into my face
Way into my face
I mean, pushing her face into my face

Okay, Trixie. I GET IT!
She does not let go of me 
Until we have written sixteen poems

This takes thirty-seven minutes
Editing?
Schemditing.

I am not that kind of writer.
And Trixie HATES editing.
We simply do not do it.

I begin to type,
Wondering if any of this
Makes enough sense even to me.

One of them stands out
Trixie has endeared herself to me once again.
And validated me. I think I may be a poet. Not secretly any more though.

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Date: 5/17/2019 2:38:00 PM
Trixie and your dendrites...LOL... The leitmotifs in Caren Krutsinger's battle for Truth, Justice, and the Poetic Way!! Super-Prolific-Poetess! (That's you! Don't know quite how you keep it up, day in, day out... Best wishes, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 4:35:00 PM
This is my secret, my friend. I have more than one poet inside battling to be the "poet" of the day in Caren-land. This is the secret. Which is no secret at all. Sometimes I post poems I do not recognize in any way a few days later. It is the weirdness of me that keeps this going. Insanity also helps.
Date: 5/17/2019 10:27:00 AM
you are so lucky to have Trixie to throw you ideas I get my inspiration from things around me, news and through soup contests. Never know when a poem will come so I have a pen and pad with me everywhere:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/17/2019 4:37:00 PM
Nina Parmenter is the best muse I have when Trixie is too exhausted. One time after a tiny glass of wine Nina sent me ten poem ideas, and I wrote them all up quickly and happily. She is my secondary back-up-muse, and could be yours also, Jan. I highly recommend her and she comes cheap. I will take ten percent of whatever she charges you, as it is generous of me to share her talents.
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