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Triumphant While Staying Low

"A man's pride shall bring him low: but honour shall uphold the humble in spirit." Proverbs 29:23 of the King James Bible
Aspiring for achievement glow That vanquishes painful defeat’s shadow Arrogance stands at loftiness gate for a show While selfishness glitters midst jewel of hypocrite’s woe… Oh, proud human nature, needs heaven blow To mutter need for divine blessing flow And be triumphant, staying low.
March 21, 2025 2nd place, "Write Seven Beautiful Lines With A Twist" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 3/23/2025

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Date: 3/24/2025 2:05:00 AM
Wonderful wise words!
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Date: 3/22/2025 11:55:00 PM
Very good use of the four given words, Beata. The quote went so well with it too
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Date: 3/21/2025 7:54:00 PM
That was expressed so effectively. Outstanding work on the poem, Beata. I completely concur with your perspective.
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Date: 3/21/2025 2:46:00 PM
I like it - be triumphant - staying low!
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Date: 3/21/2025 4:03:00 AM
This is so motivating!
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