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Triple Tanka-Changing Colors and Moods

Green was the color which my sight beheld for long, now trees turn auburn setting a melancholic mood... mourning the liveliness gone. Lofty, dense mountains tower hills with grapes and pumpkins as their aroma spreads; these cliffs suited for olive groves... won't protect them from a storm. Thoughts intensify, foreseeing winter's sadness, noticing the wise ants storing food before snow comes... this image makes one ponder.

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Date: 10/13/2010 2:45:00 PM
Very nice interchange of colors and moods thereof, Andrew
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Date: 10/13/2010 9:58:00 AM
Great job! Good luck on the contest!
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