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- Triple Poem -

~ LIGHT AND JOY ~

You fill every part of my heart with a warm and sunny glow
I see the colors, the beauty, the contours and the depth
As the day approaches night, where life exists in my own rainbow


~ ALONE AND SCARED  ~

When darkness falls, loneliness is like black waves
Each tear drop drips with a resounding echo
The sky is full of demons and you will become their slave


~ THE SECRET OF THE DARK ~

Heavens flames, and the kisses of the river's polluted waters
This experience is quite powerful for a human being
Without qualities, such as love and empathy, I'm the devil's daughter





06/01/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Threesome Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One 
1st place in the contest
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Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 6:14 PM
wow, you outdid yourself, and wrote beautifully. a well deserved win for triple effort.
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:42 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Agustin Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 11:57 PM
Wow! congrats. Thanks for sharing these poetic lines of wisdom. God bless you. (Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments.)
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:42 PM
- Many thanks Beata, for visits, comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 1:44 AM
Lovely thoughts and words in your 3x3. Congrats on your placement!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:41 PM
- Many thanks for visits, comments and congratulations John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Silent One’s “Threesome”. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:40 PM
- Many thanks for congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Lol..Silent One asked just for a flower and you gave him a garden.. 3 top winner.. and 3 congrats..
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:40 PM
- Many thanks for visits, comments and congratulations Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Excellent write Anne-Lise, glad to see this one at the top!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:38 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 7:18 AM
You did a triple threesome, just for sheer effort, and of course three great separate three liners.. i have to award you first place... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:38 PM
- I really appreciate my 1st place in your contest, S.O. :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Wow fantastic on this threesome so full of imagery for S1 contest I assume. Good luck. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 12:34 PM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit and lovely comments, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Fantastic writing with light and dark imagery! Surely will be at the top!
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:31 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 2:36 AM
Three poetic gems Anne, well written. Good luck. Tom
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:31 AM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 8:05 PM
great poems for silent ones contest... all three are good but i think the middle one is my favorite of them all... wonderfully crafted entry for the contest... best wishes my friend... :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:30 AM
- Thank you very much, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 6, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Three great poems for Silent One's contest, Sunshine! I especially like the "black waves" and the echo of the tear falling in the second poem. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:29 AM
- Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 1:57 PM
Beautiful threesome Anne, GL in the Contest...hugs
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:29 AM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Fabulous work of art--excellent write, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:29 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Beautifully done and very creative my friend. here's wishing you the best of luck in the contest
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:29 AM
- Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Powerful verses , profound stimulating words. Good luck my friend Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:28 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 1:10 PM
wow, Sunshine, well done. luck in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 8:28 AM
- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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