Trip

hospital lags, time drags, 
fingers turn blue, holding mirages,
life blurs, common sense ain't no six sense.
needles in my arm, drips feed my being,
sprayed no message, sick in a bowl,
drugs taken mixed with alcohol,
mistaken bodies, at this time I have none,
have to eat, water my palette.
giving all my love to the nurses,
I behaved but they are angels,
when you not yourself, who am I,
polite, scared to leave, but I must go home,
home, my castle. protection,
ask for help, ask for weakness,
build it, house it, brave your insecurities,
pop another pill with a swig of vodka,
drop and wonder why? 
my friends I hold out my hands,
decided to be me, and hold my urges,
happy to be myself once again....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/4/2014 5:43:00 PM
dark deep write - sounds like the most horrid experience depicted in this write - my friend's wife is alcohol dependent - I pray she gets the help she needs:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2014 1:09:00 AM
Oh David - my heart goes out to you - stay strong my friend I pray you get your issues resolved:-) Hugs Jan xx
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David Bucknell
Date: 12/4/2014 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Jan, most horrific times of my life. I've been to rehab 4-5 Times, In a coma for 3 days on one of them......Cheers David....
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