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three divine beings two perceived in human form one sacred spirit When is it that three entities can truly be seen as one? When two are the Father and Spirit and the third is the Son *February 27, 2019 For Charles Messina’s Charliekucoup challenge

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Date: 3/31/2019 10:43:00 AM
Hello Carolyn yes that is the way it is. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/29/2019 11:55:00 AM
I have contemplated this mystery many times. A lovely, insightful haiku. So well written, classic. Congratulations on your win, Carolyn.
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Date: 3/15/2019 4:50:00 PM
Wonderful use of a haiku, I think everyone has pondered that trinity versus one issue, good way to answer it, enjoyed it, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2019 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on a great romantic Haiku & Couplet, Carolyn, lovely spiritual write .. a fav for me ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/7/2019 4:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Carlyn :) -
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Date: 3/6/2019 2:56:00 PM
You did really well with religious theme, Carolyn. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 3/6/2019 1:26:00 PM
This is another great one, Carolyn. Love the last line...very well done. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. hugs Charlie
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Date: 3/3/2019 10:12:00 PM
EXCELLENT.
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Date: 3/2/2019 1:34:00 AM
Divine beauty, Carolyn!
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Date: 3/1/2019 2:18:00 PM
Another WoW! Excellent Carolyn. Love this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/28/2019 7:10:00 PM
wow Carolyn you have nailed this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/28/2019 8:00:00 PM
Appreciate your comment, Jan!
Date: 2/28/2019 6:49:00 PM
WOw, you did amazing, Carolyn!!!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/28/2019 8:00:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 2/28/2019 6:49:00 PM
I told you that you could do it!!
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Date: 2/28/2019 1:28:00 PM
You certainly found the right key to success, Carolyn! You have a winner on your hands:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/28/2019 10:24:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, an excellent write for the contest. I love the content. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/28/2019 7:48:00 AM
- Lovely written, dear Carolyn :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2019 1:53:00 AM
Very beautiful! :)
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Date: 2/27/2019 9:41:00 PM
Superb poem, Carolyn.
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Date: 2/27/2019 5:47:00 PM
Yet all one God! Beautiful!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/27/2019 8:52:00 PM
All those years of Catholic schooling led me here. Thanks for reading, Kim!
Date: 2/27/2019 4:04:00 PM
Beautifully conceived, depicted, worded, and rhymed. Divinely inspired, my friend. Very, very nicely done. ~ gw
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 2/27/2019 8:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gershon. This appeared the only option to have three in one.