Trillergy

Faint away Ry Cooder 
as the candle flame danced 
reddish green and the wick crackled 

Cassiopeia together 
through the night screen 
crooned Diana Krall 
and a dying moon 

three white birds 
softly perched at the 
window sill 
hoping to join in 
their warble a suitable fit 

insects of every shape 
and watercolor 
tangoed past 
as if ordered 
by some higher authority 

stinging pain carom off the 
right side of my heart 
and get lost 

fall asleep 
earlier than smoking the wicker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/4/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Alan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:59:00 AM
lovely! felt like i was in that room with you.
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 5:45:00 AM
Very vivid picture painted. Soft sultry ambience - in keeping with Diana Krall. By the way, she is one of my favorites. Great writing, Alan. Many congrats on this feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the soup
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