Trillergy

Faint away Ry Cooder 
as the candle flame danced 
reddish green and the wick crackled 

Cassiopeia together 
through the night screen 
crooned Diana Krall 
and a dying moon 

three white birds 
softly perched at the 
window sill 
hoping to join in 
their warble a suitable fit 

insects of every shape 
and watercolor 
tangoed past 
as if ordered 
by some higher authority 

stinging pain carom off the 
right side of my heart 
and get lost 

fall asleep 
earlier than smoking the wicker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Alan. Love, Carol
Bauer Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 6:59 AM
lovely! felt like i was in that room with you.
Brown Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alan. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Very vivid picture painted. Soft sultry ambience - in keeping with Diana Krall. By the way, she is one of my favorites. Great writing, Alan. Many congrats on this feature of the week. Lainie
Mehta Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the soup
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