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"Special times, that lovers know, a feeling starts and then it grows, Falling in love again, in a wonderfull world of our own." Lyric quote by Ted Mulry.

Wine touched lips.
Gentle sips.
Felt her hips.

Pressed to mine.
Felt so fine.
Sensed a sign.

I entreat,
Our breaths meet.
Love so sweet.

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Valsa George

Date: 7/29/2025 9:39:00 PM

Lovely poem highlighting the intimacy of two hearts in love and the joy their union brings. Congratulations on your first place win.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/14/2025 1:13:00 PM

Just catching up on thank you's dear friend. Sorry it took so long. So here's a big THANK YOU.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 7/29/2025 12:30:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in my contest Speaks. Like the picture that fits nicely with your poem

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/14/2025 1:13:00 PM

Just catching up on thank you's dear friend. Sorry it took so long. So here's a big THANK YOU.

Jay Narain

Date: 7/23/2025 11:36:00 AM

Lovely love poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/14/2025 1:13:00 PM

Just catching up on thank you's dear friend. Sorry it took so long. So here's a big THANK YOU.