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Tricky

TRICKY
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her sleek form sashays
gliding on patio with grace,
tricky eyes aglow
with savvy feline cunning…
she clutches prized dinner’s prey.

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time for sneaky play
a sneer, a squeak, and a splash!
woolen yarns unfurl 
meshing our catty faces...
shrewd moon laughs at naughty games 




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Especially written for Linda Marie’s Bag of Tricks
By nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Kash Poet Date: 7/25/2011 10:44:00 PM Hey Nette ,Congrats on your 2nd place win .Enjoyed. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/25/2011 10:28:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/25/2011 7:52:00 AM Nette, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest :) *hugs* Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 7/24/2011 4:18:00 AM hey Nette, congrats on your win, David Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/23/2011 8:41:00 PM Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/23/2011 2:36:00 PM I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : ) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/23/2011 2:08:00 PM My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, nette Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/23/2011 1:54:00 PM Congrats Nette luv on your success in my contest and thankxx for your constant support... mesmerizing words as always luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/23/2011 12:15:00 PM VERY interesting one, Nette. It tells a fun little story. Congrats on your win. HOpe you are having a great day. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/8/2011 9:13:00 PM The feline of the species can be so crafty, tricky etc. It's their right, their trait - love the spin on this Nette, Princess to be :) have a most wonderful weekend :) smiles 4 U Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 7/8/2011 3:02:00 PM Nice job my friend. Love the theme. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/8/2011 2:29:00 PM Good one enjoyed very much..Reads like winners' circle to me..Good luck..That must be a very cunning cat..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/8/2011 7:06:00 AM hey waitnig for a new treat!Soupmail!Come visit.... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/7/2011 11:23:00 PM so is this you, Nette? I need to reread the contest rules. this is one I really want to do but am putting it off. So sorry if I have not commented to you lately on anything. I'm going to blog about that right now. I enjoyed this poem of yours. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/7/2011 4:47:00 PM thankxx for supporting my current contest Nette luv.. good luck .. am sure will luv luv luv your bag of tricks entry ... appreciate your sweet remarks on my contest entries too.. we are in the middle of torrential rains tonight.. Venus is not liking the thunder boom booms..after her day at the beach..oh.. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 7/7/2011 4:40:00 PM enjoyed reading today!! Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 7/7/2011 10:41:00 AM nicely done good luck in the contest. cory Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 7/7/2011 10:12:00 AM Tricky indeed Nette, enjoyed this.. All the best for Linda's contest *hugs* ;) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/7/2011 8:46:00 AM Very tricky and sneaky indeed- cute write about a cat, Nette-is this about your cat? and haha yup, this is me, just being sort of crazy ;) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/7/2011 6:38:00 AM What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your poetry in which you share a little of yourself maybe without even realizing it you have written from your soul. Thank you for sharing your magnificent poetry with us Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/7/2011 4:43:00 AM gliding on patio with grace.......check syllable;) Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 7/7/2011 4:20:00 AM Very icely done, Loved this. Could see the kitties at play. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Paul Beadnall Date: 7/7/2011 3:18:00 AM Thoroughly enjoyable read,nette. Is this a cat you have or imagination ... Thank you for your kind encouraging comment and marking on my poem " The calling bird " P.S. where are you from, i`m from N E . England x Login to Reply