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Trick Poetry - Poem - Nature the Artist

NATURE THE ARTIST A Trick Poem ~~~~~~~~~~~ She's painted snowdrops in winter, peeking through late snow, daffodils in early spring, dancing to gentle breezes, tulips in the shining sun, beauty reaching for the sky, gladioli in the summertime, the sunflower a witness to buddleia and butterflies, drinking of much nectar, and caterpillars on mint, feeding pre-empting nakedness, the golden leaves of autumn, leaving much flora bare, She paints all when she has time, naked until next spring. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Read as a 2 complete stand-alone poems*, 2 separate stand-alone poems ether side of the commas, and multiple other formats. If I give examples I think it will spoil it, a hint; you can only start from a comma. Have fun, and enjoy... Mick *A first line example: She's painted snowdrops in winter, peeking through late snow, peeking through late snow, she's painted snowdrops in winter,

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Date: 2/18/2018 1:10:00 PM
Wow ,this is clever, had to read it a couple if times . Brilliantly done Mick.I've never seen this. You are one talented poet. Regards Tom
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:01:00 PM
Tom, Thanks Tom! One of my biggest challenges, and thanks to your comment I read it another umpteenth time and spotted an error. Now corrected. And some more examples if you follow the link: https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/trick_poetry_-_nature_the_artist_2_995571

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