Elaine George Poet Concrete

Trick Or Treat? (Shape Poetry)

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                                                i could have been a pie
                                            but you turned me into a face
                                          with jagged teeth and evil eyes
                                        that makes /\  the  /\ children cry
                                        they scream     /\  as  they run by 
                                        afraid they might look in my eyes       
                                         and see the  devil  there and die
                                         but I'm just /\/\/\/\ a pumpkin
                                               in a Halloween disguise



                                                 Written October 1, 2009

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Debbie Guzzi October 9, 2009 at 4:19 PM I say it Concrete hahahahaha hoowllll and good for my contest. I poem about a pumpkin that looks like a pumpkin CONCRETE> Gotcha! Light & Love

Robin L. Gass October 4, 2009 at 8:13 AM This is such a wonderful display of your talents, Lainie! You did a beautiful job with this shape! Love Robin

Donna Golden October 3, 2009 at 10:09 PM I love how you cleverly crafted this tricky treat, Lanie! Muuaahahaha! Hugs, Donna

Doris Culverhouse October 3, 2009 at 4:19 PM nicley penned, funny, I like the shape too.

John Freeman October 2, 2009 at 8:20 PM Brilliantly written and very cute poem Elaine, good job. Thanks for sharing, God bless, Sincerely Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown October 2, 2009 at 6:20 AM ~~~Magnificent~~~ Lainie. Love, Carol

Kate W October 1, 2009 at 7:30 PM exellent imagination....................kate

Geoffery Mchugh October 1, 2009 at 7:03 PM Very cool, Elaine.

Carrie Richards October 1, 2009 at 5:55 PM So creative, cute and clever!! How fun is this one?!!!! ~ Great job!~ love, Carrie

Karla Null October 1, 2009 at 5:51 PM What a cleaver way of putting it, I really like it...Karla