Notes About The Poem

Awarded:  SECOND PLACE

Contest:  Funny Spooks

Sponsored by:  Carol Brown

Trick Or Treat - Nightmare Comedy

In my armchair
By the fire
I drifted off to sleep
Down and down and down I fell
Into a well so deep
While outside the shadows
Of the night began to creep
Along the ground
Among the leaves
That swirled and twirled and leaped

Then - suddenly
I was awakened
By a rap tapping on my door
And woke up so bewildered
In a place 
I had never been before
As monsters seeped
Out through the cracks
Across the hardwood floor
I screamed and screamed
Until I lost my voice -
 And then I
Screamed some more

I watched in horror
From the ceiling
Where from a rope I hung
From a chandelier
Above their jagged teeth
And drooling tongues
Then I saw one slither
Up the stairs
And through the rungs
And when he finally
Grabbed me
I felt my last breath
Leave my lungs.


I saw myself
Below me
When the monster
Threw me to the floor
Where upon
They all joined in
To eat a feast
Of human smorgasbord
On legs and arms and torso
They gorged and gorged and gorged
Leaving just my head
Insanely grinning
Like a pumpkin gourd

An then I heard a rap a tap
A rap a tapping at the door
And woke up screaming
In a daze
Just where I was before
And through the window
I could see them
Behind those faces
That they wore
 Monsters - screaming! Trick or treat
It’s Halloween once more


Happy Halloween!
Watch out for the ghosts and goblins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Hamilton Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 2:50 PM
hi Elaine I love the build up a scarey and exciting pen congrats on win Shadow x smile
Johnson Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 10:54 PM
A scary one but, you never lost your rhyme. Congratulations. love, Joyce
Adams Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 8:33 PM
this started out so scary and ended so cute....enjoyed your poem, congrats on your win :)
Ryerson Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 3:23 AM
Wow! What an imagination you have Elaine...This sounds like a nightmare and I LOVE the ending...Congrats my friend - Tim
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October 12, 2013 at 11:41 AM
Elaine.. congratulations on your win. Always & Forever =Linda=
A  Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 11:08 AM
haha, you sure hit me good with this one... love everything about it.......... congrats..............SKAT
Gass Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Excellent and spooky, Lainie! Congratulations on your Win! Glad it was only a nightmare! Love, Robin
Bourner Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 7:38 AM
a nightmare on halloween! i'd be pretty scared to, congrats on your 2nd place win!-----Ell
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October 2, 2009 at 1:27 PM
Sounds scary to me. Fun too! Congratulations on your second place finish in Carol's contest. Way to go my friend. Enjoy your honor! Karen
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October 2, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Hooray for you Elaine....a 2nd place winning poem!! Great job, enjoyable to read! ~ Love, Carrie
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October 2, 2009 at 11:30 AM
Elaine, congratulations on 2nd place in the contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations and thank you for taking part in my contest Lainie. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Thank you dear Lainie for entering my contest. Love, Carol
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