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Tribute To Women

Born into the lap of loneliness Adam paced restless up and down God knew he badly needed a mate And willed the solitary man, a companion Nonpareil in beauty and grace, God wanted her to be the marvel of marvels With wonderful craftsmanship, God began working on His new creation Seeing God laboring overtime The angels in Heaven came in hordes. Overwhelmed by awe and wonder Rallying round Him, they asked in chorus “Lord, you seem to take extra care In the making of your latest work, Have you any special intent? God smiled a gentle smile And said in solemn air “She should be of a special stuff Strong enough to withstand all the shocks But delicate enough to bend and bow Sweet enough to draw everyone to her charm But tough enough to bear extra burden She should have a heart very deep To hold gallons of liquid love And a mind patient enough To forbear all rebukes She should have a temperament Willing to forgive and forget She should be warm enough To kiss away all tears With the magic to heal the bleeding hearts She should bear the seeds of progeny And shall be the great MOTHER to all Sister, friend, mate and mother- all rolled into one The Angels were moved to surprise, Over the attributes ascribed to woman They wanted to have a closer look And just touch and feel that hour glass figure Unlike Adam’s steely frame They found her to be of a soft texture With projections and depressions Curves and slants here and there “Oh, she is so fragile and soft” The angels exclaimed in unison Not hiding their disbelief They openly gave vent to their doubt “With such delicate torso How can she perform all her tasks?” God replied in assured tone; “She is soft, I agree, from hilt to heel, But equally tough……… None can guess what she can accomplish! She can fight to the end for what she thinks is right She has such great power of endurance And the gift of intuition, but…. but, As nothing of this world is perfect This woman too has one serious flaw She tends to forget her own worth” Thus God’s supreme handiwork was born A marvel of creation, a miracle worthy of adulation!
March.29.2022 (I had written this for Beta Augustin's Poetry Contest. Sadly I understand now that poems in Ode form alone are accepted)

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Date: 4/4/2022 7:51:00 AM
Well done "She should be of a special stuff Strong enough to withstand all the shocks But delicate enough to bend and bow Sweet enough to draw everyone to her charm But tough enough to bear extra burden"
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Date: 3/31/2022 11:32:00 AM
And you my dear friend and amazing woman and poetess were gifted with an intense gift, a gift which inspires all your avid readers on soup! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/30/2022 1:41:00 AM
Eve was a perfect handiwork. Even after the fall most women are an example of purity. Great poem.
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:08:00 PM
"This woman too has one serious flaw She tends to forget her own worth.” Many times, it is because a man has failed to acknowledge the attributes of woman, I'm sad to say. God bless all woman, for they were created to fill man's loneliness and be his helper. Wonderful tribute to women in any form of poetry, Valsa. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 3/29/2022 11:21:00 AM
Well said and done, just the same! A fitting tribute! Aloha!
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Date: 3/29/2022 7:15:00 AM
A brilliant tribute to all women Valsa, we'd be truly lost without them. Tom
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Date: 3/29/2022 7:00:00 AM
Valsa, you have paid an exquisite tribute. Each verse contains a meaningful homage. With this excellent poem, you demonstrate your admiration for women. On a deeper level, they are intelligent entities. Indeed, you are praiseworthy!
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Date: 3/29/2022 5:02:00 AM
Great story telling skills, Valsa. You honor women with this splendid write. They are superior human beings. Indeed worthy of adulation!
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:21:00 AM
Wonderful tribute Valsa.. each line is an important dedication.. brilliant. So sad this will not be accepted, but it can be seen as an ode....
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Date: 3/29/2022 2:12:00 AM
Brilliant tribute of Eve in the garden of Eden. Wonder how she fared when she ate the forbidden fruit. A lovely poem full of great imagery.
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