Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Trespassing Moonlight

trespassing moonlight
caressing your sleeping face
sweat beads glistening
your face is bright summer sky
sleepless night's secret love scene.



© kashinath karmakar (11th July 2011)
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Placement:HM ; (July 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar

Date:11th July 2011

Contest:Tanka You

Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Elaine George July 18, 2011 at 11:30 AM Beautiful Tanka, Kash. Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown July 18, 2011 at 10:17 AM Congratulations on your win Kashinath in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta July 17, 2011 at 5:52 PM My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, kashinath

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2011 at 1:08 PM Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot July 17, 2011 at 8:53 AM congrats on your hm in the contest with this romantic take on the theme, I think it's beautifully written (I would've placed it much higher!) :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 16, 2011 at 9:52 PM Congrats Kash on your HM in Summer Nights luv with this masterpiece poetry ..luv this one..

Francine Roberts July 16, 2011 at 9:23 PM congrats Kashinath on your Honorable Mention in the contest

Wilma Neels July 12, 2011 at 9:55 AM Enjoyed this Kash ;) all the best for the contest.. Soupmail returned!!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2011 at 7:00 AM Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Kashinath. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz July 12, 2011 at 4:10 AM Very poetic and well thought-out poem. Perfect title for this piece! I'm sure this will score very highly!

Andrea Dietrich July 11, 2011 at 11:39 PM This is absolutely beautiful, Kashinath. HOw I wish I had time to even think for these many contests going on right now. I sure hope this scores high for you, my friend.

Nette Onclaud July 11, 2011 at 10:09 PM love how you expressed your crossing the twilight zone,, kash.. whoot! come visit! :) huggs with winning streaks, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 11, 2011 at 8:17 PM oh so sweetly penned and touching to the heart Kash.. good luck in the contest my friend.. summer nights should all be as this one..luv..

Kash Poet July 11, 2011 at 2:57 PM Enjoyed my sleepless night!