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Trembling...

It doesn't take a chill to make me shiver It can happen when I'm not prepared A thing of beauty can make me quiver Tiny goosebumps for me aren't rare Glorious music can do the trick A lovely sunset can bring the tears Most of all, what makes me tremble Your slightest touch when you are here...

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/8/2011 3:35:00 AM

Very passionate write!Goes to my Favs.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/5/2009 1:35:00 PM

good writing, a thing of beauty can... is a deep line nicely done.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/4/2009 7:47:00 AM

So full of emotion Carrie. I truly loved reading it. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/4/2009 12:51:00 AM

Loved it all, the shape, the size, the quality, the simplicity, the rhytm, and the form...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 9/3/2009 11:36:00 PM

Carrie thanks for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/3/2009 7:16:00 PM

Carrie, I can really relate to this. I often get chills reading poetry or listening to music. I can tell you are a very passionate person. This is a lovely poem. Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/3/2009 6:14:00 PM

your last line is warm and wonderful! Carrie!...jim

William Masonis

Date: 9/3/2009 5:46:00 PM

Cool work yourself; clearly another hopeless Romantic like me! Just wanted to say that yours was the fastest comment I've ever received; I submitted that poem literally minutes ago. Glad you liked. Let me ask a favor of you, if I may: if you're any better at contacting the rest of the Soupers out there than I am, and you probably are; I've never been able to get my article feature here to work right - please tell the folks out there I said a Big Thanks for all the good comments they've made!