Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Tanka

Trembles and Thrills

Trembles and thrills





Calm as sea waters 
lay my subtle emotions,
Heart had snubbed its throb,
as eyes stared into zero,
Tears constantly slid to blend.

Those warm breaths on neck,
His touch sent shuddering tides,
Skin to skin embrace
set my withering beats rise,
Passion storm coerced within.

Butterflies fluttered,
Thousand petals unfolded,
Ocean sent quivers 
as alluring waves enticed,
Moon dressed us silvery white.




Tanka- 5/7/5/7/7
Written Dec 11th, 2015
For contest "Trembles and thrills" by Olive

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Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 12:46 AM Dr Upma, awesome win. Linda

Noel Villarosa December 20, 2015 at 12:31 AM Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma, a good fit for the theme of the contest. (^_^)

Skat A December 19, 2015 at 2:08 PM Dr Upma, congratulations on your nice win. SKAT

Michael Tor December 19, 2015 at 5:50 AM Congratulations on a great write Dr, Sharma enjoyed very much!!

Viv Wigley December 19, 2015 at 2:48 AM A lovely, gentle piece, Dr Upma, much enjoyed it. well done. Viv x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 19, 2015 at 2:28 AM Dr. Upma, ***I agree that even the saddest memories brings TREMBLES and THRILLS, I read your poems as single strings but they contain and lures to encapsulate the theme… I enjoyed the ride you placed me while I'm reading this… Imagery is here too!!! BIG CONGRATULATIONS! I thank you for participating!!~ Hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Sandra Haight December 11, 2015 at 1:39 PM Wonderful imagery for 'trembles and thrills,' Dr. Upma. Beautifully done. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra