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*Image of Angel Oak Tree by Gifer. Trees II Lemony tea stirring neath a shady tree, Sugary three cue my teeth, cool mid glee, Bakery brie spilt on sheath, a swap need be, ~~later~~ A guarantee, if bequeath, come certain fee, In Hawaii, underneath, a blanketed plea, Will read, decree--laid a wreath at an oak tree. 2020 July 10 *2nd Place* Triple Rhyme ~~Beth Evans: Judged 2020 July 11

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/15/2020 2:23:00 PM

Your verse is so picturesque that it paints a gorgeous image of that tree in blooming beauty. Congratulations on your win William. Blessings :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/15/2020 8:30:00 PM

Gracious sharing truly, Aditi, your words overwhelm delightfully -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

James Inman

Date: 7/12/2020 11:14:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/12/2020 11:46:00 PM

Thank you, James, for your kind share -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Eric Cohen

Date: 7/11/2020 4:56:00 PM

Love the imagery and transitions to later time, especially Hawaii. Congrats, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 5:29:00 PM

My heartfelt thanks, Eric, with your warming augmentations -- Aloha~@William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 1:50:00 PM

Another winner!! Congrats, William, and I just love how you keep coming up with such great images to illustrate your pretty poems.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 1:59:00 PM

As it was meant to muse pretty faces, Andrea, blessed with kindly hearts -- Aloha~@William

John Watt

Date: 7/11/2020 1:48:00 PM

Congrats on your lovely tree poem set in triple rhyme, William! I enjoyed the read and the rippling, soothing image ~ John

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 2:05:00 PM

Admittedly, twas challenging, John, surprised being placed, albeit, a hearty extension to your thought-filled considerations -- Aloha~@William

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/11/2020 11:49:00 AM

Congrats!! on your win my friend, well-executed William...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 2:14:00 PM

I am humble due to your expressions, ^WW^, you honor me -- Aloha~@William

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/11/2020 8:49:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this fine poem, William. Janice

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 8:53:00 AM

I am grateful for your kind thoughts, Janice, as always -- Aloha~@William

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/11/2020 8:24:00 AM

William, you went beyond the required rhyming requirements. Super job and congratulations.

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/11/2020 8:45:00 AM

I appreciate your considerations, Jenna, for I am humble -- Aloha~@William