Trees Or Bees

People all around out raking leaves  
Hear them say i should cut down these annoying trees
I rake them up and in an hour i rake some more 
Why did i start   Really i ask what for
My back hurts and now i sit in pain 
Just to go out and do it  all again
Summer comes its as hot as can be 
And where do we place are Butts  under the shade of a tree
So we shouldn't really complain about our trees
They really are valuable as we can see
And really people if someone was to ask me 
Lets plot against these annoying bees  
Out in my backyard doing my own thing 
Lounging listening to the birds chirp and sing
Minding my own business sipping my Tahiti treat
Along came a bee and thought how sweet 
Buzzing around my head with that annoying sound 
My arms were a flapping all around 
I thought i scared it off because it seem to be gone 
Than i felt the pain in my head and i knew i was wrong
Well i gave a yell and ran for the house 
As if i was a women that was scared of a mouse 
Smacking my head as hard as i could 
Well now you know that wasent good 
Now a pain in my hand and still in my head 
And a bee that still wasent dead
So i gave it a flick and it hit the floor 
Stomped on it hard and that bee was no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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