Treedom

Walking through the orchard 
Amongst so many trees
Fruit lay on the ground rotting
The trees had a strange disease

They were lost in their apathy
No longer fruitful anymore
Sheltered in a land of beauty
On the Okanagan shore

The birds sang soft and sadly
A strange poetic song
Flying together in arcs
All they wanted was to belong

In search of warmth and protection
They landed on branches reaching high
A transplanted tree from Jamaica
Majestically framed by the sky

Uprooted from the island
Oh so many years ago
With branches reaching outward
His leaves had a golden glow

I sat beneath his branches
So his story he could tell
Into my outstretched palm
A perfectly formed apple fell

As I bit into the fruit
I could hear his voice so clear
A different kind of listening
I heard him whisper in my ear

"Within my laughter there is magic
Yet I am serious at my core
Let me help you find your wisdom
A wooden key unlocks the door

I have traveled many places
Felt the sand beneath my feet
I have known the joy of victory
Yet I have learned more from defeat

The things I thought so important
Slipped from my clutching hands
As I chased after foolishness
In a world filled with demands

Not connected to my quiet
That silent outcry of my soul
My branches stripped of everything
As I played my worldly role

Once true to myself I found freedom
In a city perched by a lake
Lush branches fully outstretched
I now give instead of take

Not born to be a conquerer
Love is my soulful call
Rooted within my spirit
Available to one and all

I bring you peace from my island
See how less can be so much more
Come have a taste of freedom
Beneath my branches on this shore!


Inspired by and dedicated to Rawle James.
Rawle is the founder of the "Inspired Word Cafe".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/21/2015 9:45:00 AM
Uprooted from the island Oh so many years ago With branches reaching outward His leaves had a golden glow: Loved this very much Richard..charming inspiring write.God bless
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2015 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Rajat, I appreciate your visit.
Date: 2/20/2015 4:20:00 AM
What a gem! So well constructed, a tranquil, endearing read. Most happy to have read this tonight.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/20/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Scott.
Date: 2/19/2015 2:47:00 PM
Very well conceived and penned, Richard! Excellent...A "Seven"!! :) john.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2015 6:15:00 PM
Thanks John.
Date: 2/16/2015 4:51:00 PM
Wow! Richard what is the world going to come to if we don't do something now and stop thinking of the pocket book instead of the world. We do not want to lose this beautiful world we live in. Blessings eve. Oh! and a real big 7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the 7.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 6:17:00 PM
I have a feeling we are going to find out, us humans are a greedy lot.
Date: 2/16/2015 8:24:00 AM
Wow! This is brilliant writing. I love the line "Not connected to my quiet" The stillness in our souls is where we find respite from the noise of the world.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 9:23:00 AM
Hi Monterey my response to you about Quiet jumped up one!
Date: 2/15/2015 3:28:00 PM
A georgeous and VERY WELL thought out piece. Very impresive!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Carol.
Date: 2/15/2015 3:06:00 PM
Today is National Canadian Flag day ( Google would never lie to me ) so I must say this poem resonates even more on this special day!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 8:10:00 AM
Today? I'm pretty sure it was yesterday!
Date: 2/15/2015 12:01:00 PM
I came by yesterday and read this write dear poet, and enjoyed it. I was writing a comment about it and CRASH ! I definately am getting a new computer ! I forgot to get back to you....well here I am, And TY for the inspiring write sir ! I still can't use my e-mail yet....hmmmm. ;) Have a blessed day...much love, james
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 8:12:00 AM
You are kind James, thanks for coming back to post a comment.
Date: 2/15/2015 8:12:00 AM
Well done my dear friend. Filled with wise words -- learning from failure, letting go . . . I would like to meet Rawle James, he seems like an inspiration -- such are your words.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2015 8:13:00 AM
He does a lot to support the arts.
Date: 2/14/2015 7:11:00 PM
Richard, your poem is epic, I so enjoyed the story of the tree, well done and thanks for your visit ~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 8:39:00 PM
As always it was my pleasure to visit.
Date: 2/14/2015 4:29:00 PM
Great story!! Happy Valentines Day :~) xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 8:40:00 PM
Thanks, I am impressed with your ABCeDariun!
Date: 2/14/2015 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful piece Richard.. So ripe with many great metaphors and solid meaning
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 8:41:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim.
Date: 2/14/2015 1:34:00 PM
My friend, you have nailed it with this great write! A7 and adding this one to my fav list here.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert.
Date: 2/14/2015 12:38:00 PM
Beautiful write Richard. Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 12:43:00 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Date: 2/14/2015 11:36:00 AM
Lovely dedication Richard and i love the clever title:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 11:50:00 AM
Happy Valentines Jan, thanks for the positive visit, 7 and hug.
Date: 2/14/2015 11:15:00 AM
a wonderful message in this poem and wonderful dedication to the founder of Inspired Word Cafe. Keep being inspired because your words here are so meaningful, Richard. happy Valentine's Day to you.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/14/2015 10:15:00 AM
Absolutely love dedication, Richard. I'm sure it will touch his heart. I loved listening to this song. Happy Valentine's Day!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/14/2015 11:49:00 AM
Hi Eileen Happy Valentines to you as well. I'm a little sad today, my sweetie is in Vancouver at a friends funeral so we will have to delay our valentine celebration.
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