Tree of Light

When I was a child I used to observe little black ants in my room gathered around a sugar cube that seemed huge for them. I was always surprised when I saw them carrying it outside into a hole in the corner. My mother always eased my amazement with the simple thought that faith could move mountains if I really believed. Over the years, I grew up to realize that faith is a personal painting on one's inner canvas that has a unique touch to it. It is only I who can perceive the strength of my faith and how I offer it to God. My faith was a seed sown in my heart in childhood but my own experiences and turns bloomed it into a lush tree that provides soothing shade on sunny days. The oars of my faith sparkle with a light in turbulent oceans to row my boat as far as I choose to nurture them with goodwill. As long as I value every human I meet as another child of God and be honest to my duties, I have something to believe in and my faith will keep growing into a divine garden from where I can sow a seed in another heart and wait till it blooms.
an infant seed sown lush tree of light in garden faith blooming with truth
July 11, 2020 My Faith Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina Riddle ~Premiere Contest Winner: 7th Place

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Date: 7/30/2020 7:02:00 PM
A beautiful rendering of your faith in haibun form...well-said; faith moves the mountains of doubt and unbelief and allows us to be an instrument of God's goodwill. Congrats on your win but more on your piece.
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Date: 7/22/2020 7:11:00 PM
Another favorite among the entries. Like the style and message. Congrats.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:40:00 AM
Glad you love it Rob. Thanks for your visit and appreciation :)
Date: 7/22/2020 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I really love this as usual with your words. You're such a impressive and expressive writer. God bless you
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:39:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation and for my placement in your contest Gina! Much love and blessings :)
Date: 7/14/2020 4:07:00 AM
" My faith was a seed sown in my heart in childhood but my own experiences and turns bloomed it into a lush tree that provides soothing shade on sunny days." WOW! Bravo! WOW!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/14/2020 10:01:00 AM
Glad you loved those lines Caren. Thank you for appreciating. Much love :)
Date: 7/12/2020 11:26:00 PM
This is really rich, Aditi, and so inspiring. I love the line beginning "The oars of my faith" and your metaphors of paintings and blossoms in a divine garden. Also like the gratitude you express to your mother for her wisdom. Such a delight to read, my friend.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 7:58:00 AM
I am glad you loved the references over here dear friend. Your kind appreciation always encourages me to write. Thank you for your loving words. Blessings :)
Date: 7/12/2020 6:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem of faith and memories. I love the narrative and haiku. You are a gifted storyteller, Aditi! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 7:57:00 AM
Your loving words always make my day Rhonda. Glad you loved it. Thank you for stopping by to appreciate it. Much love :)
Date: 7/11/2020 4:21:00 PM
Beautifully composed Aditi, your faith is everything. Tom
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 7:56:00 AM
Indeed Tom. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Blessings :)
Date: 7/11/2020 3:51:00 PM
Great storytelling Aditi..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 7:55:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciation SO :)
Date: 7/11/2020 2:54:00 PM
Wow, Aditi, this is so fantastic! You're definitely one of the very best poets I've ever seen on this site, IMO.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/13/2020 7:55:00 AM
If there's anything I am grateful for at PS, it is the overflowing encouragement that I receive from talented poets like you. Thanks for all the appreciation you provide my friend. Glad you loved it :)
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Date: 7/11/2020 3:19:00 PM
I agree Edward, she's an amazing writer
Date: 7/11/2020 1:45:00 PM
You write so wonderfully, Aditi. I am reminded of that cute song from my youth about the little ant who moves a rubber tree plant. High Hopes I think it was called.
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Date: 7/13/2020 7:53:00 AM
That sounds lovely Andrea. Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 7/11/2020 7:42:00 AM
Aditi, this is beautiful!
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Date: 7/11/2020 8:14:00 AM
Glad you loved it Kim. Thank you :)
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