Treasures of Your Soul

Whispered words from behind a wall,
to cronies gathered short and tall.
“Go on ahead,” he said, “let's see.”
“If I can turn her sweet on me.”

So from within, she heard the tale:
the rye, small, snickers, the wolves’ wails.
Yet, like the doe in the fires light,
the wail entranced, did not cause fright.

Wide-eyed, so stunned, the morsel stood,
in frozen stance within the wood.
Within his reach and steady glance,
the hunter broached the ancient dance.

With swagger, grace, he set the pace.
the honeyed tongued Knight on the chase.
He spoke words of honor, brave deeds,
of his claimed virtues she took heed.

“No, ” said the Maid, for she was shy.
“I’m afraid,” she moaned. “Do you lie?”
He turned her chin, and eye to eye,
stroked her fair cheek and heard her sigh.

Offered cake to this starving waif,
with trembling hands, she took the bait.
For upon his lips and rough skin,
She could, sweet-sugar, taste within.

He sought the warmth of her blood; bone.
He thought the conquest was his own.
Yet, she too held a hope within,
to bring forth the goodness in him.

Oh, she could feel his aching need,
'Twas his seedling soul, she'd feed.
The prey, prayed, to touch his heart.
to give the Hunter a new start.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Many’s the times, his teeth came near,
to the pulsing vein in her throat.
Many times the Universe stopped
like a dandelion seed afloat.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The hunter balked, stayed for a time,
tasted the joy of her sweet wine;
loving the feel of a drink new,
a gift, love, offered each of you.

Could he extinguish this pure light?
Could He reciprocate, cause fright?
Sorry, was the wolf deep within.
He was sorry; she’d let him in.

Sorry, he couldn't grow in her arms,
Sorry, he couldn't loose to her charms.
“Sorry,” on the tip of his tongue.
As he left her, unharmed, on run.

“Sorry.” said she, rising higher,
made stronger by her pure desire.
Like the ancient Phoenix, she rose,
on the wings of her loves fire.

And prayer floated back from above.
A prayer, sent with her hearts' love.
echoing his sentiment many ways.
“Sorry Love," She said. 

"May the Wolf find his Way.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/19/2010 9:26:00 AM
Thank you for sharing the inner you Deborah, many congratulations on your win in Amy's fine contest >> James
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Date: 6/18/2010 10:50:00 AM
INteresting write, Deb! Congratulations on your win, and I am so happy I can now view the winner circles more quickly again! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/17/2010 2:04:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Amy's contest with this most awesome write and super win for a super entry... enjoy the sweet victory TEACH.. luv ..pupil.."Sweetheart"
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Date: 7/15/2009 4:49:00 PM
Deborah - Congratulations on placing in Christie & Sharon’s contest – I apologize I wasn’t able to congratulate you until now, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 7/1/2009 11:35:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Sharon/Christie's contest Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/1/2009 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on this fine winning poem!! Well done! ~
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Date: 7/1/2009 5:11:00 PM
Deborah, congrats on your success in Sharon and Christies Contest...Raul
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Date: 6/18/2009 11:36:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments Debbie .Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/17/2009 2:50:00 PM
Beautiful ballad Deborah ! TY for having me in your contest ! It was fun ! james
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Date: 6/17/2009 2:30:00 PM
this goes to my favs cos it is so beautiful--awesome my friend------charma
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Date: 6/16/2009 11:52:00 PM
A fine narrative Debbie.Thank you for the much esteemed placing in your contest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:57:00 PM
love spins a web in this fine ballad, Deb, jim
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