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The Extra Mile Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina 

written 7/21/2023

You're gone from my life, but you still Sit by my side; a breath to fill. And say, "You can do it, and will." If I could bring you back. Do you recall when I met you? You touched me, shiver went right through. You were the one for me I knew. You'd fill the love I'd lack. We'd put our foreheads together, Navigate through stormy weather; Lay our souls on fields of heather. Never turn and backtrack.

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Date: 9/1/2023 8:02:00 AM
Excellent; a huge congratulations.
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Date: 8/30/2023 2:05:00 PM
So beautifully written, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/30/2023 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2023 6:22:00 AM
Back, lack, backtrack... Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2023 5:17:00 AM
Lovely write, Eve. If ONLY we can bring them back...thank God for memories, my dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 7/21/2023 9:46:00 PM
Wonderful memories of lives meant to be shared together, Eve. I'm happy you've experience togetherness and hold onto the beautiful memories. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/21/2023 2:05:00 PM
A lovely write with a great ending. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed weekend.....................
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