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"The human heart has hidden treasures, in secret kept, in silence sealed" - Charlotte Bronte

"The greatest treasures are those invisible to the eye but found by the heart" - Judy Garland

"Walk patiently through this troubled world, and you will find great treasure. Even though your house may be small, look within it!" - Rumi

"Meditate. Breathe consciously. Listen. Pay attention. Treasure every moment. Make the connection." - Oprah Winfrey

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A Sam Scott poem:
2nd March 2024
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I open up my chest You see my beating heart I sometimes wear it on my sleeve If ever we're apart I know I should be guarded Protective of this flesh But then again your gaze upon me Rejuvinates to fresh I open up my tiny realm Allow you to step in The veil between our worlds sometimes Evaporates to thin You see me when I'm naked Clothed in nothing more Than a garb of insecurity Without asking for more You see me when I battle With the enemy inside You see me in those moments When I'm overcome with pride.. And all the while your kindness Rekindles all that I am not A treasure you uncover Where an 'X' just marks the spot Through the sand you dig relentless On the island of my soul To uncover wealth within me Lift me up and make me whole

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Deb M

Date: 3/11/2024 1:08:00 AM

Sam….what an incredibly beautiful poem written from the hearts view….so clever! Loved it! Debx

Sam Scott
Date: 3/11/2024 3:39:00 AM

Thank you Debx for your delightful comment. Always appreciate you stopping by :))

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/3/2024 7:48:00 PM

This is top notch. I loved reading this. It is good to be appreciated. Thd poem is like a treasure map.

Sam Scott
Date: 3/3/2024 11:03:00 PM

Thanks Hilda for yor encouragement..glad it spoke to you :) Sx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/2/2024 4:54:00 PM

this is certainly an evocative poem, Sam. You've beautifully described a relationship in which both parties 'treasure' one another--accepting vulnerabilities and still regarding the other person as a treasure. Absolutely a brilliantly written poem. Faving...enjoy your evening, Sara

Sam Scott
Date: 3/2/2024 6:35:00 PM

Thank you my dear Sara :) I think you saw past the simplistic words into the deeper heart. Love what you do. Sx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/2/2024 1:47:00 PM

Dear Sam, this is a raw and intimate portrayal of vulnerability and connection. The imagery of opening your chest to reveal your beating heart is deeply evocative, inviting the reader into the depths of your emotions. Your words capture the essence of trust and authenticity in relationships, where walls are torn down, and souls are laid bare. This is a beautifully crafted piece that speaks of the complexities of human experience and the transformative power of love and acceptance. - Blessings, Daniel

Sam Scott
Date: 3/2/2024 6:37:00 PM

As always, Daniel, you never short-change on your wonderful comments. So appreciated. Blessings to you. Sx

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/2/2024 1:15:00 PM

Sam this is beautiful, so heartfelt and real. Poetry at its best. Each line is a meaningful pleasure to read. .. best wishes Wen

Sam Scott
Date: 3/2/2024 6:33:00 PM

Thank you dear heart x I always value your comments and sometimes poetry comes from a deep place, as you know. Blessings, always Sx

Tom Woody

Date: 3/2/2024 6:27:00 AM

Hey Sam, I see you're still writing heartfelt, poignant poetry. Keep it up my friend

Sam Scott
Date: 3/2/2024 6:32:00 AM

Grateful, Tom - thanking you for the encouragement!! :))