Treading Lightly

Be careful what you wish for
Sometimes you’re better
Left in the dark

Stethoscope around his neck
In his pristine white coat
Treading lightly with bedside manner

Report in one hand
Here it comes
The results are in

Brutally knocking the wind
Out of my sail



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolves Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:05 PM
ouch... this is a scary one.
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 6:24 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Running Wolves.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 8:20 AM
This is powerful, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Caren.
Achilles Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 4:05 AM
Makes you think when you enjoy good health- how random it could next be you, well written, Julie
Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 3:19 PM
So very true, Julie.
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