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Traveling Light

The trampoline helped me to distress
acrobatic jumps higher and higher still
problems and responsibilities in the air
jumping so high I landed on a pair of wings,

Hanging ten on his massive feathery wings
we soared through wisps of white clouds
he said your on a designated journey
to when you laughed as a child,

He flew me low across my old hometown
across the ball field and playground
watching myself play with friends down below
I could hear the child like laughter echo,

He flew me back and I held on tight
telling me to leave my excess baggage with him
with that he took off with the speed of light
leaving me on the ground giggling.


9-19-17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/24/2017 11:52:00 AM
Very, very good write Che, what a great way to visit your past. Blessings
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/24/2017 9:17:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pete! Blessings~Che:))
Date: 9/21/2017 4:20:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/21/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Ravi!~Che :))
Date: 9/19/2017 7:16:00 PM
Nice angelic write, Carol. It made me smile w/joy. Well penned poem. Love and hugs always.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/19/2017 7:36:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Freddie! P & L~Che :) PS I'm not Carol lol!
Date: 9/19/2017 9:54:00 AM
Nice imagery Cheryl..
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/19/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One!~Che :))
Date: 9/19/2017 8:56:00 AM
Your imagination took flight, Cheryl. Nicely done.
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/19/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Lin!~Che :))
Date: 9/19/2017 8:18:00 AM
Great imaginative piece and with wisdom to boot!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 9/19/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so much for Very kind comment and visit Mike!~Che :))

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