Cheryl Hoffman Poet Tanka

Travel Tanka

By air, land or sea
people have longed to achieve
some fond memories
mostly still travel by car
dire straits wont get you too far

Snarled traffic delays
driving round the holidays
sit and grit your teeth
you watch gas tank go to "E"
bladder bursting at the seams!



12-30-17

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Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2017 at 6:53 PM oh, that second tanka I can sure relate to . Someone needs to design a bottle that GIRLS can pee into. (I wonder if one exists because sometimes I can sure use one!!) Cheryl Hoffman December 31, 2017 at 8:06 PM We need to design one together and show it to the Shark Tank people, lol! Thanks for stop by Andrea!~Che :)

Silent One December 31, 2017 at 11:04 AM Two great tanka che.. Cheryl Hoffman December 31, 2017 at 11:09 AM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; Appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf December 31, 2017 at 6:42 AM Cheryl, I like your humor. I am lucky to have all my family in the immediate area so I don’t have to travel over the holidays. Happy new year my poetic friend, may 2018 be the best ever! John Cheryl Hoffman December 31, 2017 at 9:29 AM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; glad you like my humor and Happy New Year to you too my poetic friend! The best to you too!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues December 30, 2017 at 9:31 PM So much fun...lol Cheryl Hoffman December 30, 2017 at 10:56 PM Thanks for nice comment and visit Kim; glad you got chuckle out of it!~Che :)