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Travel Tanka

By air, land or sea people have longed to achieve some fond memories mostly still travel by car dire straits wont get you too far Snarled traffic delays driving round the holidays sit and grit your teeth you watch gas tank go to "E" bladder bursting at the seams! 12-30-17

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2017 6:53:00 PM

oh, that second tanka I can sure relate to . Someone needs to design a bottle that GIRLS can pee into. (I wonder if one exists because sometimes I can sure use one!!)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/31/2017 8:06:00 PM

We need to design one together and show it to the Shark Tank people, lol! Thanks for stop by Andrea!~Che :)

Silent One

Date: 12/31/2017 11:04:00 AM

Two great tanka che..

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/31/2017 11:09:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; Appreciate it!~Che :)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/31/2017 6:42:00 AM

Cheryl, I like your humor. I am lucky to have all my family in the immediate area so I don’t have to travel over the holidays. Happy new year my poetic friend, may 2018 be the best ever! John

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/31/2017 9:29:00 AM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit John; glad you like my humor and Happy New Year to you too my poetic friend! The best to you too!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/30/2017 9:31:00 PM

So much fun...lol

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/30/2017 10:56:00 PM

Thanks for nice comment and visit Kim; glad you got chuckle out of it!~Che :)