Travel and Tsuris and Grandkids, Oh My

Getting together with girlfriends entails,
Aside from the obvious – eating!
Discussions of life and the various ways
We fill time up that seems to be fleeting.

Of course, we compare all our upcoming trips
For our journeys are different and take us
Within the U.S. or across the big pond
Where no ship, car or plane would forsake us.

We cannot resist as we show off the kids,
For each one of our grands is amazing
And it’s lovely to share pics and videos as
We soak up the delight and the praising.

But the topic that overtakes most of our time
Is our health and the way it’s declining – 
The aches and the pains and the doctors and tests;
We commiserate, kvetching** and whining.

As the years ratchet up, that’s the way that it goes,
There is sunshine but also much raining
So we laugh and we smile at how lucky we are
Though, of course, we leave room for complaining!

*tsuris - troubles or woes; aggravation
**complaining
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Leffanta Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Well captured and reported, Ilene, but most elderly ailments would disappear if they just went out for a walk every morning! Aloha! Rico
Cunningham Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 10:02 PM
I think youve hit a nerve with many of us ilene, once you pass forty bits start to drop off and you creak like hell lol
Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Very cute. I wish you and your girlfriends long life mit gezunt un nisht tsuris! Enjoyed the poem immensely. Thanks, Gershon
Borke Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:47 PM
You’re making the most of retirement. As long as health is good, it’s the best years. So much freedom, including freedom to sleep, as compared to raising infants. That stage is hard!
Turner Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 6:48 PM
I got no grand kids but I got plenty of aches and pains. A fun read Ilene.
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