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Trapped On Canvas

The dark canvas sits idly on the crooked easel, malignant storm clouds threaten the rising sun, hopeful rays bestow light upon the tortured weasel that struggles to find reality within the framed run. Despondent eyes that catalytically impale a presage for all, that look beyond the innocents of the moment, eyes that hint of yesterday, yet today speak a message. A request, a languishing gesture, all without improvement and transferred to this casual viewer with deadly movement. © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Date: 11/7/2020 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win Harry 'The dark canvas sits idly on the crooked easel......... hopeful rays bestow light upon the tortured weasel ........and transferred to this casual viewer with deadly movement' - unbelievable imagery, deep and dark - your creative poetry is always a joy to read. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/2/2020 4:29:00 AM
Love this! Great work! A fave!
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Date: 11/2/2020 2:26:00 AM
A great collaboration, Harry. ~ Elaine
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Date: 10/28/2020 6:46:00 PM
I really like this one, harry. Change is inevitable whether we want it to happen or not. The layout on the page looks great! :)
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Date: 10/25/2020 9:00:00 PM
Vividly descriptive WINNING poem with an air of mystery, Harry. Janice
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Date: 10/25/2020 3:25:00 PM
Wow! Great one...dark canvas, crooked easel, tortured, despondent all leading to something malevolent. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/22/2020 5:53:00 PM
wow, brilliant writing, Harry. I don't know your placement but your win is deserved. Congrats, my friend. (I left you a few soupmails back)
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Date: 10/22/2020 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Harry, great imagery in your collaboration poem.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2020 12:26:00 PM
love the way you did this, my friend - very deep & thoughtful
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Date: 10/21/2020 2:53:00 PM
Elegant work. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 10/21/2020 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/20/2020 7:57:00 AM
A well written collaboration to Silent Ones verse Harry, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 10/20/2020 6:07:00 AM
Your canvas shine in this write, Harry. Great imagery and details.
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Date: 10/20/2020 2:21:00 AM
- This is an interesting concept, Harry - ... we should not be afraid of change - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2020 1:23:00 AM
Plenty of imagery in this collaboration. Finely done. ~~
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