Trapped In Time

The trap sprung, a horror to haunt my every moment. ©7/20/2018 for the In the Moment of Time Poetry contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/21/2018 3:05:00 PM

A compelling write, John, arousing dark intrigue.. a captivating and spine-tingling thriller.. Warmest wishes always my Boston friend.. ~Susan

John Lawless
Date: 7/21/2018 10:54:00 PM

Thanks Susan, I was hoping to trigger a response in the readers.....

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/20/2018 11:23:00 PM

So few words, with a strong impact! It takes talent to write like this. I'm always impressed.

John Lawless
Date: 7/21/2018 10:52:00 PM

Thanks Becca, appreciate your stopping by to read and comment

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/20/2018 4:16:00 PM

gripping write like a shocking omen, john... beautifully quilled... huggs

John Lawless
Date: 7/21/2018 10:50:00 PM

Thanks Nette, I was shooting for an open ended enterpretation

Lyric Man

Date: 7/20/2018 8:26:00 AM

Whoa.. that's riveting!

Lyric Man
Date: 7/21/2018 2:50:00 AM

That's possible!

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2018 1:32:00 PM

perhaps a lyric along those lines.....

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/20/2018 8:09:00 AM

One line to crawl under the skin. Good job ;) good luck in the contest! xomo

John Lawless
Date: 7/20/2018 1:31:00 PM

...Or into the fabric of your being....