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Trapped In An Attic Room

I came to live in the old house, when I was ten; I was led to an attic room; it seemed a cozy den. Quickly, the wood door was slammed shut, it was solid and locked; It was a small space and dirty; and the window was blocked. Time passed, minutes, days, months and years, I was left clothes and food; In the mornings it had been placed; even a cat that mewed. I pleaded and screamed and asked why, but no one spoke to me; I liked the girl in the mirror; she said, "wish we had tea." And I wished for a pen to write, and smooth, white paper; Then, one day the door swung open, insane, I did not stir. __________________________ September 11, 2017 Poulter's Measure Rhyme/ Trapped in an Attic Room Copyright Protected, ID 938902 Written for the contest, Stuck sponsor, Sara Kendrick Third Place
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Haight Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Nicely done, Constance, and congratulations on your fine podium win! Sandra
Webster Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 3:00 PM
intense! congratulations, Broken Wings
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 8:33 AM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..I know that this one was based on fiction or from seeing such a happening on TV in the news or a movie but it has happened..Sad to think that it could and does happen..Sara
Inman Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 7:50 AM
A scary story BW. Lost in one's own mind. A doubly gruesome tale.
R. V. Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance, on your win. It's a terrible tale, though. It reminds me of Plato's tale of the man who remained cooped up in a cave so long that when he eventually came out, could not stand the blinding light! Great story telling!
Tor Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:38 PM
Great ending. Congratulations Constance on a well deserved win..
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:14 PM
Gosh what a creepy poem Constance the imagery was so intense:-) Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:20 PM
What prison could be worse than one's own mind! Very moving poem, Constance. Congrats on your win! Janice
Lindley Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Truly a magnificent creation my friend. Sadly ,many are thus trapped in the sad and dark lives they have made by following the greedy path that the world so promotes and oft rewards with material wealth. Dark curtains placed over Light.
Sivey Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 7:40 PM
I believe you have nailed this one! What an ingenious write my friend! You have surely written a magnificent poem, one that I really enjoyed reading this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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