Trapped

Locked out of my home, I cry out for help
Desperate for some help, please come here quick
I knock and kick the door many times, oh help
Me that is trapped here is now out of whack.

Surely someone will come by to save me
My current state in panic and sadness
Due to being denied my refuge, same
As being locked out increasing madness.

Feeling alone, I reach for my phone now
Calling home, I hear the sound but no one
There to pick it up, I feel down and low
As I felt sad, the wind blew to someone.

The door opens as though to usher me
In with the person beside me with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/28/2017 9:21:00 AM
I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..I liked the ending to this one like supernatural help came..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2017 7:56:00 AM
I can feel your panic Georgiana. Nice write.
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/27/2017 4:25:00 PM
great story telling Georgiana :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2017 8:07:00 PM
Cool telling.
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Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:24:00 PM
Thanks Ronald!
Date: 8/20/2017 12:48:00 PM
I have been locked out before too and there is no good feeling about being locked out of our refuge. Well done!
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Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:25:00 PM
Indeed so. It certainly makes you feel trapped inside. Thanks again Heidi
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