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Trapped

In my dream, I saw a weeping man Not knowing what he had done, I lent him my hand When he reached, his hand slipped through mine Turns out his soul was trapped in my mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/31/2019 5:39:00 AM
Awesome poem, WT.
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Date: 9/14/2018 11:26:00 PM
This is a great poem.
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Date: 9/14/2018 4:54:00 PM
Mind my, entrapped soul. HIS was out turning mine through slipped hand. His reached yours when he hande mine. I done lent what he had not knowing man. Weeping We All Saw me in My Dream We Few Are & Am In.
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Date: 9/12/2018 9:21:00 PM
Very Cool Poem I Like it!
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Date: 9/12/2018 5:36:00 PM
I like the line his soul was trapped in my mind, very nice read.
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Date: 9/12/2018 1:11:00 PM
This is such an interesting read, a great write.
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Date: 9/12/2018 11:28:00 AM
Four simple lines, but such a deep poem.
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Date: 9/10/2018 4:29:00 PM
WOW
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