Transparency

Author Note: I wrote this after the Address last night as my take on the transparency of our 
government. 



Where does the white go
when the snow melts?
It becomes transparent,
for all to witness its passage
from one form
to another?

It will never again have substance
or be recognized as what 
was its original state.

Transparency,
doomed to mix with 
unsavory elements,
no longer a brilliant white,
rather, 
becomes covert.

Covered by dirty slush
to be stomped throughout
the halls of government,
to be spread around
under the guise of openness.

Soon,
will become invisible,
no longer a nuisance,
transparent, to forever
be squelched
by power and corruption 
hiding behind closed doors,
where transparency is not allowed,
where truth becomes lies,
where is hidden....
where the white goes 
when the snow melts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 11, 2010 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Mac. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 10, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Congrats Mac on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest.. good luck my friend in the next phase ..luv..
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October 25, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Mac. Love, Carol
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January 28, 2010 at 4:30 PM
very interesting....the best one I've heard recently ..which i do believe but didn't know..is this was meant to be a Republic not a Democracy..not sure what the difference is but it dern sure hasn't been a Democracy in a LONG time! Off to wikipedia for clarity!
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January 28, 2010 at 8:53 AM
The snow always makes me think of "innocence," Mac. And just as we innocently place our faith in politicians only to have our trust betrayed, Mother Nature's gift to earth is turned to dirty slush by an unappreciate people and an unsavory climate. This is an outstanding poem, Max, and it's going to my favorites. Tremendous analogy and insight here! Love, Carolyn
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