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It was almost like twilight this morning
Grey clouds so low on the hills
Not far for rain to fall                                              Double Kimo

Gutters rushed their burdens toward the sea
The shards of summer swirling
Winter’s finger beckons

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2009

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Cecil Hickman Date: 1/1/2010 4:37:00 PM beautiful flowing lines with wonderful imagery, I liked the title you chose for this piece, it leads into the words within this one,,Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil Login to Reply

Date: 12/20/2009 4:53:00 PM Wow! Good use of imagery and personification for a artistic view. There is so much depth in just six lines. Well done! Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/16/2009 3:39:00 PM Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us today Barbara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 12/16/2009 12:12:00 AM One for my favourites Barbara,especially like the enigma depth in first triplet.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/15/2009 2:57:00 PM Magnificent imagery and a sense of serenity, even as "Winter's finger beckons." There are mornings like this here as well, fellow LNC. Today the fog was so think it seemed like gray clouds were everywhere. I'll bet the Pie Lady has her apron on again real soon. Take it easy at work and enjoy the holidays with your family. Much love and gratitude for your friendship this year as 2010 approaches, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 12/15/2009 2:56:00 PM This is so wonderful, Barbara!! (Not far for rain to fall...and winter's finger beckoning....terrifec lines!) What a nice poem, for this rainy day! ~ Love, Carrie Login to Reply