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Feb.10. 2025

8x8x8x8 Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Charles Messino

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Night lay in deep, mournful silence,
Quiet without life’s sweet presence.
Shadows moved brutally monstrous.
Arrows of fear dashed horrendous.

Soon darkness from the earth moved out.
Moon went to its secret hide out.
Sun came on his diurnal shift.
Fun it was to watch snow clouds drift.

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/24/2025 1:26:00 PM I really like this. Another contest not judged yet? Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 2/10/2025 11:05:00 AM Great write. Nice poem. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/10/2025 4:22:00 AM Ahh!! Sounds like a precious moment or two in time to enjoy. I am glad I chose it to read today. Reads like a good contender for a contest to me. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 2/10/2025 3:29:00 AM Love love this! Dear sweet valsa! You are a natural with rhymes and how youv painted imagery in such a picturesque manner is truly impressive! I love so many lines in this and the flow of your word weaving too. Especially love the way you’ve ended with “Moon went to its secret hide out. Sun came on his diurnal shift. Fun it was to watch snow clouds drift.” So dreamy! And it is soul warming to witness yes. And to read this too. A FAVE! Sending you light always Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/10/2025 3:18:00 AM Your imagery is at your best. Well done. Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/9/2025 8:55:00 PM Your poem is very descriptive and poetic too, you seem to poetically be sitting in the pulse of it all, lovely ! Login to Reply