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Transient

just for a moment- a tear for tomorrow's death upon beauty's face Inspired by Carolyn's crying flower

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/19/2010 11:42:00 AM

Congrats Brian on your win in the mini contest yesterday...sweet words..sweeter win...luv ..."Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 1:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Weeping Flower contest Brian. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/18/2010 10:25:00 PM

Brian, congrats on fourth place in the contest...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2010 10:13:00 PM

This one is great! congratulations, Luv,Andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/18/2010 9:42:00 PM

Beautiful and sad Haiku, dear Brian. Congratulations on your win. Love, Iolanda

John Freeman

Date: 4/18/2010 6:03:00 PM

An awesome poem Brian. Congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/18/2010 5:44:00 PM

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Carrie Richards

Date: 4/18/2010 5:43:00 PM

Well done, Brian....! yes...the flower is short lived, and perhaps will wither up tomorrow..sadly sweet poem.

Kim M

Date: 4/18/2010 5:38:00 PM

Nice one, Brian!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/18/2010 5:16:00 PM

Brian, congratulations on taking fourth place in the contest. Iolanda and I judged these entries together, assigning points to our rankings, and you came out a winner. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2010 1:54:00 PM

Cool write Brian and good luck in this mini contest by Carolyn.. good relationship from the flower to your pen.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Skat A

Date: 4/18/2010 12:08:00 AM

ENJOYED THIS ONE TONIGHT