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Crystal clear stream As if in a dream Listening to its flow Slowly awaken from her daydream Drenched and invigorated Way beyond what she anticipated Hopeful even during adversity Her faith has germinated 270620111430 Contest : A 1 to 8 Poem 5th place

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James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2011 10:53:00 AM

Fantastic poetry Wilma. It sure has made me smile reading this fine Monday evening. This type of poetry is right up Brian's street, many congratulations :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 7:21:00 PM

wonderful writing and one I may never had seen had it not been for this contest of Brian's. a belated congrats for this one!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/3/2011 6:53:00 PM

Wonderful message on the healing power of nature :) Congratulations on your win!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/1/2011 2:43:00 PM

I love this form!!!! And you have put togetgher some amazing words here.. Congrats my partner in crime....love & miss you Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2011 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/28/2011 6:36:00 PM

GReat work my friend....!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 5:00:00 AM

lovely and delicate lines Wilma with intense expression .. dreams have a way of invigorating us to extend our faith ..luv this last two lines..speaks volumes luv ..