Wilma Neels Poet Rubaiyat

'transformed'

Crystal clear stream
As if in a dream
Listening to its flow
Slowly awaken from her daydream

Drenched and invigorated
Way beyond what she anticipated
Hopeful even during adversity
Her faith has germinated



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Contest : A 1 to 8 Poem
5th place

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James Fraser July 11, 2011 at 10:53 AM Fantastic poetry Wilma. It sure has made me smile reading this fine Monday evening. This type of poetry is right up Brian's street, many congratulations :)

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2011 at 7:21 PM wonderful writing and one I may never had seen had it not been for this contest of Brian's. a belated congrats for this one!

Black Eyed Susan July 3, 2011 at 6:53 PM Wonderful message on the healing power of nature :) Congratulations on your win!

Michael J. Falotico July 1, 2011 at 2:43 PM I love this form!!!! And you have put togetgher some amazing words here.. Congrats my partner in crime....love & miss you Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown June 29, 2011 at 4:47 AM Congratulations Wilma on your win in the contest sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse June 28, 2011 at 6:36 PM GReat work my friend....!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 28, 2011 at 5:00 AM lovely and delicate lines Wilma with intense expression .. dreams have a way of invigorating us to extend our faith ..luv this last two lines..speaks volumes luv ..

Elaine George June 27, 2011 at 10:22 PM Sensational Rubaivat, Wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

James Foulk June 27, 2011 at 12:20 PM a wonderful and well written piece of work.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 27, 2011 at 12:14 PM I like the way the tranformation takes place, Wilma

Zzzzz Zzzzz June 27, 2011 at 11:19 AM A very nice poem, with good poetic language. Well done.

Kash Poet June 27, 2011 at 9:10 AM Very nice Transformation here Wilma...wonderful realization...enjoyed.